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Sirenz — Cathaidd Sketch 1st Stage
Published: 2009-10-03 02:15:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1897; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 83
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It was an enchanted broom that would turn anyone who would ride on it during a full moon into a monster. After breaking her latest broom, the witch Cathaidd, borrowed it from her witches' coven. She had no idea what horror would come to her during this recreational ride through the clear skies...Please give me some feedback on this sketch before I ink/color. Thanks!
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I love the design for this witch! That being said, her upper arms seem to be out of proportion. Maybe trying adding a little length to the arm not holding the broom? Also, the hand on her hip looks amazing, but a tad small and the fingers appear a bit...stumpy? I hate to use that word since it looks so elegant. Maybe try lengthening the fingers go get the correct hand size?
The end of the skirt on the leg behind the broom should be closer to the leg itself based on the movement of the skirt on the opposite side. Right now you've got a bit of a 'half block half not' look going. Don't know if that was what you were going for, but I would try and make that side more fluid like.
Hope that helps!
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Oooh she is really nicely done ^_^ I really look forward to seeing how she progresses
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fantastic sketch, the characters seems to have a very earth toned orientation so perhaps a pallet of dark pastel tones would suit?
however the broom does not give the effect of potential horror to come as depicted in your description, but that may just be me.
i hope this is appropriate, good luck with the ink/colour. '3'
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It's kinda hard to see the design in the broom cause the sketch but I think it's really great work. I can't wait to see how it turns out and the "transformation" sequence if you make one ^-^
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