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SinistrosePhosphate In reply to ??? [2017-07-22 07:38:08 +0000 UTC]
Hello! And thank you very much for spending your time to write such a wonderful comment. I really appreciate it!
Thank you very much for looking up Kamijo and picking up the "Interview with the Vampire" reference, too! You see, Kamijo is a big fan of the Vampire Chronicles, so he actually did a series of photographs where he posed as Lestat from the movie. This picture was drawn from one of them: 3.bp.blogspot.com/-87YDtj-hpwQ… Since I used this photo as reference, it explains why everything looks very cramped in the same picture. (It also explains his smaller hands and shoulders, too.) This was probably not the best photographic reference, but I thought it was an appropriate one for that moment.
I do agree with you, there are a large number of things I can work on for the future. Anatomy remains one of my weakest points. And I have been trying to improve, one project at a time. It's just not very easy since I don't have a lot of time to draw anymore. And thank you for telling me about the "rambling" style, too. I agree with you, I was running out of time and decided to keep too many things too sketchy. I am glad you pointed that out, too. It reminds me that I need to manage my time better!
So your comment has been a lot of help! I really appreciate it!
Have a nice weekend, too!
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AlwysbCreative [2017-07-15 00:05:31 +0000 UTC]
Greetings from , I hope you won’t mind a bit of a critique!
Right off the bat, I have to say, I love this piece, there is so much emotion going on behind it, especially in the woman’s eyes, (The one with her eyes open) it’s just, stunning. I love the simple shading with the amber-like background, and I really love the way you made the bottom woman’s veil, I love how you’re able to see through it, but there is just enough shading to convey the message that it’s there!
There are just a few things I think need a little tweaking.
First, the woman at the bottom, her body is a little hard to distinguish, is she supposed to be just a head or…?
Second, I feel there needs to be some more distinct lines, especially on the top woman’s right arm, it looks a little too sketchy to me. Maybe add a darker line to kind of bring it out some more.
Lastly, I love how you did the foreshortening, and it could be just me, but I feel like the way you cut her right arm off a bit kind of makes the form a little…strange. Again, that’s probably just me!
Overall, this piece is beautiful, love the attention to detail and subtle shading you did, it really brings the whole thing together!
Anyways, that’s all from me, good luck on your art journey!
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AlwysbCreative In reply to SinistrosePhosphate [2017-07-15 15:03:30 +0000 UTC]
Aww, you are so welcome! I'm glad I could help!
(And I do apologize for confusing the genders... )
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BrambleBeee [2017-07-02 23:27:34 +0000 UTC]
Hello there! I'm here from ProjectComment ^u^
I have to say, this is a very beautiful piece! The shading on the hair looks amazing. It's detailed and soft, and looks like it could be real hair sitting upon his head. It's really hair to do all the little lines in hair so well, so good job on that! And the faces are done exceptionally well too! It's obvious that you have practice in drawing faces, because they look rather perfect. The eyebrows and eyes on the guy looks stunning, and I really like how bright and piercing the iris is. And on the girl as well, the face looks peaceful and calm and the details are really well drawn.
One problem that immediately stuck out to me in this piece though is his upper arm. I know it's suppose to be bent behind him, but it honestly kind of looks like he has a very short arm. Like his hand is sticking right out of his shoulder. If you had visibly drawn the upper arm and lower arm bending, I think it would have avoided that. (I hope that explanation makes sense, sorry if I haven't explained it well, but hopefully you see what I mean)
And my only other critique is that some of the lines on the hair are perhaps a bit too choppy? Especially at the top. It sorts of breaks up how realistic the rest of the hair works. I'm not quite sure how this is best to be fixed, but it might work better to, instead of having 3 chunks of hair in a line that are choppy and go against the rest of the hair (like how you've drawn it at the top of the hair, above his eye), it might work better to have a singular chunk of hair go against the rest, and to intersperse these throughout the hair. It'll look more natural that way.
Other that that though, I can't see a single other thing wrong with this drawing! That shading is done really well, and it's clearly visible that your skilled in drawing people traditional. This is a great piece of artwork, and I hope that you keep working and improving, because you can make some really amazing things if you do!
Hope I was able to help even a little. Have a lovely day ! <3
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BrambleBeee In reply to SinistrosePhosphate [2017-07-03 10:39:55 +0000 UTC]
Aww, it's no problem! I'm just happy to help out
Ah I see now. Honestly based on the reference I think you did the best you could! You drew the arm just like reference, so I think it's just the angle of the photo that's weird and not your drawing honestly. Same with the hair >o>
But it's great that you're trying to challenge yourself! It's really easy to get stuck in comfort zones, so I completely encourage trying out challenging poses like this one! Even if it's hard and doesn't turn out perfect at first, it's a great way to learn and improve c:
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Romacat [2017-06-22 01:51:52 +0000 UTC]
Very lovely piece! I haven't read that series in years, well I never finished it... But I did read a good amount of the books and enjoyed them. Gotta love Lestat~
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LadySionis [2017-06-21 23:27:08 +0000 UTC]
wonderful! simply wonderful as always my friend! when i saw the title, i automatically thought about Interview With a Vampire...was that some of the inspiration for the theme? as usual, your work is fantastic and bold! guess where this is going? XD
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SinistrosePhosphate In reply to LadySionis [2017-06-22 17:55:52 +0000 UTC]
As our friend the Brat Prince would say, "I assume I need no introductions."
Now, about this whole inspiration thing... Let me see, you are probably familiar with this promotional photograph: i.dailymail.co.uk/i/pix/2016/1… That was quite a famous one, I recall. In fact, it is so famous that several years later a certain musician who is quite obsessed with the Brat Prince himself decided to imitate this photograph and shoot one of his own: 3.bp.blogspot.com/-87YDtj-hpwQ…
... and now, you have your answer.
In the meantime, thank you so very much for your very kind words. And thank you for your support!
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LadySionis In reply to SinistrosePhosphate [2017-06-23 22:58:05 +0000 UTC]
oh my gosh...i went to the link...man that man is gorgeous! O_O i do hope you make more art soon! now i have to listen to the Versailles Philharmonic Quintet just to see this beautiful man! oh, and thank you for the bloody martini!
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LadySionis In reply to SinistrosePhosphate [2017-06-23 23:44:50 +0000 UTC]
GASP!!!! I MUST LISTEN TO THIS MAN!!! HE SOUNDS AND LOOKS AMAZING!!!
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LadySionis In reply to SinistrosePhosphate [2017-06-24 00:41:56 +0000 UTC]
NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T THE LINKS!!!!!!!!!
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LadySionis In reply to SinistrosePhosphate [2017-06-26 03:31:21 +0000 UTC]
okay, finally it worked! XD...whoa...i don't know what i should next...hug you or continue watching everything versailles has done. O_O they're amazing!
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LadySionis In reply to SinistrosePhosphate [2017-06-27 02:24:41 +0000 UTC]
that link! that was too awesome! you two are such great friends! i shall go forth and explore everything this loverly vampire has done!!!
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LadySionis In reply to SinistrosePhosphate [2017-06-27 02:51:08 +0000 UTC]
ah crap i did it again! why the heck do i keep making this mistake??!!! ugh, i'm so sorry for the mix-up. other than that, i really love this gorgeous vampire!!!!
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LadySionis In reply to SinistrosePhosphate [2017-06-27 03:49:32 +0000 UTC]
NO! IT'S A BLACK LINK!!! that means i can't see it!!! NOOO!!!!
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SinistrosePhosphate In reply to LadySionis [2017-06-27 04:00:00 +0000 UTC]
... oh, dear...
... well, I guess we'll just have to do this:
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LadySionis In reply to SinistrosePhosphate [2017-06-27 04:01:40 +0000 UTC]
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! WONDERFUL!!!! JUST WONDERFUL! i have to meet this man!
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SinistrosePhosphate In reply to LadySionis [2017-06-27 04:11:59 +0000 UTC]
He's already been there... twice?
Not sure if he's going again any time soon. But he has definitely been there.
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LadySionis In reply to SinistrosePhosphate [2017-06-28 01:25:07 +0000 UTC]
was he in NYC recently? if so, i was visiting some friends of mine, and i could've went to see him!!!!! I MISSED OUT ON SEEING HIM IN PUBLIC!!!!!!!!
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LadySionis In reply to SinistrosePhosphate [2017-06-28 01:44:04 +0000 UTC]
DAMMIT! IS WAS IN NYC DURING THAT YEAR!!! man..i wish i could've seen him in person. wow...that page was totally awesome! man...i have to get back into the musical world and go on tours. wait....I CAN'T SEE THE SECOND LINK!!!
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