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Siaelle — Hope

Published: 2004-05-04 06:25:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 158; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 29
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Description The pressure produced from day breaks light,
Ends the journey's of the night.
A young girl's soul - locked away,
From the person she was once today.

To force a life in shadow,
Was taught from surface deep.
Those who knew the truth watched on,
To her exhausted weep.

Again, dawn fell to dusk,
The girl fell to despair,
"Would someone hug me tight she prayed..."
"Take me away from there..."

But her true world shone through the cracks,
It kept her faith in life...
And supplied her destiny with strength,
To keep her out of strife.

Deep down her heart it knew,
One day the prayer she'd find...
One love to last forever,
Would take her from this time...

-- Sia 2002--
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Comments: 11

GenevieveLaroche [2004-08-26 13:58:46 +0000 UTC]

Very well written, i simply love the style as the overall's essence and mood. Really nice depiction, i truely like.

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Siaelle In reply to GenevieveLaroche [2004-09-02 12:50:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for your compliments, they mean a lot

Sia!

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agentgolden170 [2004-07-15 09:28:47 +0000 UTC]

Sweet writting, The picture you used is incredible, you really should submit that by itself.

-paul

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Siaelle In reply to agentgolden170 [2004-07-22 07:52:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your kind words As i mentioned, the photo was taken by my boyfriend:

ARTWORK: A huge thanks for Darkenss- for his photo --> [link]

Be sure to post a comment about the pic on his site. He certainly deserves it I reckon!

Sia

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Gilius [2004-05-04 07:51:15 +0000 UTC]

Nice as always

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bosniak [2004-05-04 06:54:57 +0000 UTC]

God's speaking

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somebody5000 [2004-05-04 06:40:20 +0000 UTC]

Very nice poem, I'm particular to the emphasis of day/night contrast you depict; "her true world shone through the cracks" as does rays of light, which represents the element of hope, me like.

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Siaelle In reply to somebody5000 [2004-05-04 06:48:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks heaps Yes, this photo is amazing - by chance the owner found my poem and showed me his photo.

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summerstar [2004-05-04 06:31:38 +0000 UTC]

A very powerful poem! I think there is a spelling error though, but good job!

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Siaelle In reply to summerstar [2004-05-04 06:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Where?!

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summerstar In reply to Siaelle [2004-05-04 06:35:56 +0000 UTC]

"Would someone hug my tight she prayed..."
Should it be "me" insted of "my"?

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