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Published: 2019-08-13 16:17:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 275; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 0
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More background practice ! I noticed the wall doesn't seem to be totally upright tho

Soris is going around town, as usual


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Comments: 7

Burke23 [2019-08-23 03:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

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thetruemask [2019-08-22 17:38:51 +0000 UTC]

Hi, Great work, i like the comic/cartoon-y feel of this piece. the character is perfect, and really like the highlights shading work, the line-work is very crisp on your character. the color tone and palette is very good also.  

the light source is clearly coming from the left, which is good its noticeable.

the back drop looks good, the sketch line-work is noticeable and looks great, 

not much to say as far as critiques go, i personally like heavier shadows in backdrops like this but its totally up to the artist how heavy to go for shadows. completely dictated by your style.

i personally might have added more weathering or scratch / crack marks to some of the brick walls, its a quick way to add more realness to the brick without spending a ton of time. but to much of that would hurt the feel of the piece and might go against your style. 

the hand he has placed on the wall might be a tad too stubby. that would be a easy fix in Photoshop, i would just use free transform to drag out to lines to keep the general line-work intact. or you could go the more time consuming way and re-sketch it. 

Keep up the good work! would like to browse more of your work.

thanks for submitting to ProjectComment and being a part of our community 

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shywah In reply to thetruemask [2019-08-22 22:56:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment ! I wasn't too sure about the lightning here, especially on the background, so i'll keep your advices in mind for the next time

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BELLAMECUCHI [2019-08-22 10:57:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is awesome! Hope you continue this project

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shywah In reply to BELLAMECUCHI [2019-08-22 22:52:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm trying to post regularily about it, glad you like it !

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QueenWilds [2019-08-13 21:18:50 +0000 UTC]

I don't know how you do your art it is wonderful

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shywah In reply to QueenWilds [2019-08-14 14:50:46 +0000 UTC]

thanks !

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