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slikkealbuen [2020-04-27 01:04:40 +0000 UTC]
i literally forgot to look at the title and i was super freaked out that oikawa was acting so strange but then i read the comments 🤦🏻♀️
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sonosomii [2020-04-15 15:09:38 +0000 UTC]
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xXJhazzyXx [2017-10-17 13:39:21 +0000 UTC]
Ummm... To think im happy that he will be my husband freaks me out but nah i love this trash.
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RiekoSan [2017-02-23 20:20:27 +0000 UTC]
dear future husband
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MusicNymph9 [2017-01-25 16:53:43 +0000 UTC]
I don't know if I'm shivering because it was so good or so chilling... either way, ooooh~! Chills~!
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JustABrokenSpirit [2016-10-16 20:32:12 +0000 UTC]
You honestly created an amazing + spot on Yandere!Oikawa!
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JuniperArcticSpirit [2016-08-24 14:52:26 +0000 UTC]
This makes me feel so uncomfortable (like,, cringing on the sight of oikawa giving me the hickeys ewo) yet i cant stop reading damn this is awesome!
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obsesioncontodo [2016-05-28 08:30:34 +0000 UTC]
You captured Yandere!Oikawa perfectly. I can honestly see him like that if it were to happen. You described the fear flawlessly; your talent is great!! Can't wait to see more ^^
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auloras [2016-04-09 09:07:15 +0000 UTC]
I think I wasn't breathing while I was reading this. *dies from nosebleed* and I love the way you write these yandere stories they're really good^^
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cremareo [2016-01-25 06:19:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh shiiiit
Oikawa pLS
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LillyPikachu [2016-01-03 12:58:18 +0000 UTC]
Hi! I absolutely love your story, I felt so many feels xD. Thing is, I also found this on another website and I just wanted to know if you might have a Quotev account and posted this on there? I just wanna make sure nobody's hard work is copied and has someone else taking the credit.
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ShoutingFir380 In reply to LillyPikachu [2016-01-07 04:21:08 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I'm so glad you liked it! I honestly wish I could still write like this; I haven't wrote much for a long time it feels like ): And I don't have a quotev, do you have a link to it by any chance? I have an account of GOTVG, but I don't believe I posted this story anywhere else lol That's very considerate of you, and I'm so glad you are looking out for stuff like that!
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LillyPikachu In reply to ShoutingFir380 [2016-01-09 04:38:34 +0000 UTC]
www.quotev.com/story/7285159/Haikyuu-Yandere
There ya go!
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LillyPikachu In reply to ShoutingFir380 [2016-01-09 04:30:34 +0000 UTC]
Well, of course! I would be absolutely devastated if someone was using my work without credit. I'll try to find the link right away!
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FliqpyxFlaky [2016-01-01 09:38:41 +0000 UTC]
Um ok this is AMAZING THANK YOU SO MUCH FROM THE BOTTOM MY HEART. THIS JUST PROVES YOU DONT NEED LEMON TO HAVE A GOOD STORY WITH TENSION AND ATTRACTION. YOU JUST NEED WRITING SKILLS!! ThAnK yOu.
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ShoutingFir380 In reply to FliqpyxFlaky [2016-01-07 04:22:49 +0000 UTC]
You're so very welcome xD I haven't wrote any lemons for a long time haha but I definitely agree, you don't need lemons.
Kinda wish I still had these skills, it's been far too long since I've wrote anything ;A;
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Rax102 [2015-11-28 21:23:58 +0000 UTC]
Kowaizumi has an angel voice, I knew it! It's a great story
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shiroharuu [2015-07-30 11:55:44 +0000 UTC]
Hey hey. I read your story and I think I can't say much more than Little-Pinkey said. Oh my, I agree so much with the statements Little-Pinkey has. This is incredible ! I am in love with the story. It is absolutely perfect how you wrote everythin so well that I was able to feel it. I couldn't breathe in the end because I thought it was happening to me. Wow. I got goosebumps. Waah, I really love Yandere Oikawa because I think behind his mask (for me it truly is a mask) of this playful and childish boy which we all know too well is in reality his true character. His true character which is his frightening and obsessive nature. Wah in my opinion he is a Yandere and I really liked how you put some example in there which support this statement. For example when he is on the court and its his time to serve he truly has the eyes of an animal or when he watched that video of other teams and analizes them. You can see that he is some frightening guy. You did suuuuuuch a good job ~
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ProfessorHanamiya [2015-06-09 22:11:36 +0000 UTC]
asldfkjksd I love your reader inserts! and you did a wonderful job laying out the plot and the emotions behind the reader!!
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vanteya37 [2015-05-04 01:21:18 +0000 UTC]
Oikawa is perfect, you did great amplifying his psycho moments. Feels like this is how his character was meant to be before the mangaka decided to go pg 13 *wipes drool off keyboard* I WANT!!!
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kawaiiCaliGirl [2015-03-04 21:22:53 +0000 UTC]
sh***********t.
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Ilovesanime342 [2015-02-20 03:34:54 +0000 UTC]
That was, until the voice of a million angels rang through the school.
“Oi! Trashkawa! Get your ass out here!”
Is it bad that I laughed my ass off here?
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Lisei5 [2015-02-05 03:02:02 +0000 UTC]
OMFG!! PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS/ CONTINUE THE STORY!! *squeals* I NEED MORE TOORU!!
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AshleyJasmine [2015-01-20 03:05:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh s hit
I knew he was a yandere that piece of trash
Ok whatever; but great job on this, author-chan! You portrayed Oikawa perfectly as well as all the other characters. Keep up the amazing writing!!
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SayaTheNerd [2015-01-04 08:04:48 +0000 UTC]
Will there be a part two!?
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ShoutingFir380 In reply to SayaTheNerd [2015-01-04 16:43:04 +0000 UTC]
Yep! I'm working on finishing it as we speak xD
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Little-Pinkey [2014-12-31 06:53:53 +0000 UTC]
I've been looking for good Oikawa fanfics! Man... he's completely psycho...and I love it! Creepily enough XD
This was the read I've been looking for, for ages! Honestly, I read like the majority of the Oikawa X Reader fics on dA, so finding this baby made me so darn happy!
Also I find this aspect of Oikawa's personality that you've decided to highlight very intriguing. When paying attention to how he was voiced, I noticed that the seiyuu ranged his voice from a sweet, soft, slightly higher pitched voice for Oikawa's usual playful tone to a deeper growl like sound (when he cursed at Kageyama at the end of episode 19). This shows an incredible variation in Oikawa's personality, making him significantly more rounded and human-like. I feel like I've digressed.
Well the point I'm trying to make here is that you've taken Oikawa, and emphasized a possible hidden aspect of him that seems to lie deep within his subconscious. Also the fact that you've managed to maintain Oikawa's natural playful nature, however go at it from a different angle than the usual one, is absolutely mesmerizing.
It was a rather creepy, masochistic type of romance-a rather parasitic relationship, if you will. However the fact that you force the ideology of the character (that she has no choice) allows us to fully live within the despair of the reader character you've created. It's genius... absolutely genius. You create the tension from the beginning, however it simply builds up all the way to the end when Iwaizumi saves the day.
Speaking of... how did our lovely Iwa-chan know that Oikawa had chased us to the bathroom?
I'm also super curious about the Karasuno Team's reaction to those hickeys, especially: Shimizu, Daichi, Asahi, possibly Hinata and Kageyama as well. I get the feeling Daichi would swear bloody murder, though he seems to suspect something
Shimizu would probably try to help the reader...
Oh and by the way that part where the reader cheers for "Onii-san," I made sure to cheer along with her!
AHHHHH I'M SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT PART!
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AWriterWithRegrets In reply to Little-Pinkey [2015-01-19 12:32:09 +0000 UTC]
Bro... This... Is... Just...
It's the exactly same thing I feel for this first part of the fic.
I found myself nodding to every line you wrote on the comment XD I agree, really, with everything pointed.
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AWriterWithRegrets [2014-12-17 11:20:57 +0000 UTC]
Gosh, I just discovered with this a soft spot I have for Yandere!Oikawa now, please send help.
I got so involved while reading that it took me a while to notice I was uncomfortable: I was clenching my fists so hard it was hurting. There is only a few fics that had me like that, yours is one of them.
I'm looking SO forward for the continuation x_x~
I loved how you managed to control the creepy and sultry personality of him and still keep him in character. The way you mixed your story with the actual storyline made me giggle like "omg so clever!".
Thank you so much for writing this!!
Also, your icon gives me life.
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ShoutingFir380 In reply to AWriterWithRegrets [2014-12-18 02:12:45 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you liked it! Sorry it made you react like that, if it was a bad reaction at first xD I have to admit, it was super fun for me to write and once I started, I couldn't stop.
I hope to have part 2 out soon ^^ And it might just be me, but seeing Oikawa's little blips of craziness is what inspired this. Like when he's watching the video and his face is so creepy xD Or the first time he served the ball at their practice and his face was so much different. It's cool though, and I think it would be really cool if he had that little bit of crazy in him, and it was triggered by certain people. ^^
Thank you so much for commenting! And reading it! xD
Thanks, I made it myself xD
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Abhieghail [2014-12-08 07:01:05 +0000 UTC]
omg omg!! i can't wait for the part 2!! >O< please update!!
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nana-naomi [2014-11-23 16:53:22 +0000 UTC]
Waiting for the second part!! ><
at first i thought this is a really long story to read but this turn to be my favorite now! Heeheehee
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ShoutingFir380 In reply to KHRIky [2014-11-20 13:33:16 +0000 UTC]
^^ I really like where it's currently going as well xD I don't think I've been this excited for an update in a long time haha!
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LovingLilac [2014-11-17 20:36:41 +0000 UTC]
This is a great story which was well-written! I enjoyed it and I could see how you felt Oikawa could secretly be a yandere with the intense animal-like moments.
More back story between the reader and Oikawa would be my suggestion as it could help with character development and increased history and bond between the two. Just a personal suggestion though, great job overall! 👍
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ShoutingFir380 In reply to LovingLilac [2014-11-18 00:14:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! ^^
I thought about adding more to their backstory (which I could still do, it would be pretty simple) but I wasn't sure how long to make it before it was too long of a oneshot. I know sometimes people don't like to read a lot in one sitting, because they could lose their spots easily. But I might just go back and add a few paragraphs of backstory ^^
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LovingLilac In reply to ShoutingFir380 [2014-11-18 03:40:27 +0000 UTC]
I understand, sometimes when I write I wonder if I should break it into 2 parts or just a long one. Length personally doesn't bug me, but if you worry about a reader loosing their spot lots of spacing helps make it easier to read, which your story was.
If you do I'll definitely read it
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ShoutingFir380 In reply to LovingLilac [2014-11-20 01:28:48 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, maybe I'll shorten the second part down a bit xD
But I did decide on a part 2, and I also devised a very clever way to sneak in the reader and Oikawa's background~
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BrinleyKirkland [2014-11-17 17:36:15 +0000 UTC]
this is so good omg and i agree that there should be a part 2 if you have time!
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