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Published: 2015-12-02 01:38:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 23491; Favourites: 453; Downloads: 0
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EDITED : I made the decision to do this comic a little more manga-like and it's really better
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I've been watching you for awhile now, and I really have to say, you are one of my favorite artists ever. The way you draw the expressions, the anatomy, the fight scenes, it's incredible and I look up to you in terms of art. I am a huge Sonamy fan and it's so nice to see the effort and style you put into this. I really never comment anymore on deviations but you certainly deserve it. The comic is amazing and I can't wait to see more of it and your art! <3
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Wow.....that is really touching my hearth......
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You should be very proud of yourself!
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Sonic looks great!!!! And I love his face hahaha
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It looks great! Better than me I'll say. XD
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Well, the colors are great, but I honestly think that the black/white style is better.
It makes it more dynamic with the higher contrast, and it makes it look more like a Japanese action manga (such as Akira).
(but still, the drawings are gorgeous)
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I edited it in black and white and will keep it that way !!! You are so damn right, it's so much better!!
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Yay!
(But you can still put a link to the colored version in case someone is not agreeing with us)
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XD man if you know how much I hate this colored version I made !
Hope I'll manage to do the next pages in a good black&white shape !
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Very well then!
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The coloring's amazing! I like this comic!
And don't be angry at me for this, but maybe you could use contractions in the text...? If you look at Sonic X even, they say "don't'cha?" instead of "Don't you?", or "Whatcha doin'?" instead of "What are you doing?"
Just a friendly suggestion. No need to regard it. (I am an editor, though.)
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No prob I take it easy ! Okay I'll see for the next !! ^^
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Okay, good. I've had... trouble with suggestions in the past...
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Thank you so much ! I really appreciate that you take your time to submit a comment here!
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Confidence, Cockyness, Arrogance, and Sarcasm will always work really well with Sonic.
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I honestly don't like Sonic with his eyelids skin colored, but your coloring style somehow made it so natural looking I actually think it fits very well here, hehe. Also, great job on the dynamic shots, I can really feel the speed of the actions ^^.
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Thank you very much for your honesty !! 
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