HyaKkiDouR4n [2011-02-28 17:30:48 +0000 UTC]
I really like the costume itself, but I don't agree with your decision on the wings. The pink is just too different from the other colors, so it doesn't "blend" well.
I am not saying the wings absolutely have to be blue or yellow (even if that would probably work very well), but I think it would be better to use a color closer to those, like a greenish blue or white.
Also, since Aurora Star has powers based on technology and gadgets, I think she could use wings that look more like they come from a technology-based device. They probably could have more geometric shapes, look holographic, or other things along those lines.
Sounds like I critique a lot, but I really like the clothing part on this. I may be biased by my magical girl fan side, but to me the clothes part look way better than the original design.
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