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Did this sketch last night while trying to do a critique. It didn't actually help me express what I wanted to express, since I could never really find the right words, but I liked the sketch anyway. So I decided to try to color it today, and rather than doing my usual over-smudged coloring I decided to leave the colors sketchy because my stuff always has better structure before I try to blend it. Plus it's really hard to get a decent idea of how the overall structure works when you're blending at 500% zoom. And this is totally anatomy practice. It might look like a pinup, but it's anatomy practice. I swear.

I think his arms may be too short. I mean, they measure up correctly against his head, but either his arms look too short to me or his torso looks too long. Honestly not sure which.

Critique is welcome, if anyone has any suggestions.

Description
Did this sketch last night while trying to do a critique. It didn't actually help me express what I wanted to express, since I could never really find the right words, but I liked the sketch anyway. So I decided to try to color it today, and rather than doing my usual over-smudged coloring I decided to leave the colors sketchy because my stuff always has better structure before I try to blend it. Plus it's really hard to get a decent idea of how the overall structure works when you're blending at 500% zoom. And this is totally anatomy practice. It might look like a pinup, but it's anatomy practice. I swear.

I think his arms may be too short. I mean, they measure up correctly against his head, but either his arms look too short to me or his torso looks too long. Honestly not sure which.

Critique is welcome, if anyone has any suggestions.