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ShadowKnil — A Fox's Cry
Published: 2006-08-23 18:54:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 194; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description I watched and waited,
Seeing your body move the way it does.

Seducing me slightly,
Within your crimson eyes.

A slight movement of your hand,
Across my cheek it caressed.

Your frantic mind,
Your frantic cry.

Through the darkness, I had heard,
Shattering it completely.

Those luscious tides,
Of your love, they rise and fall.

Even through your anger,
I could see the sadness you felt.

Wondering what had taken you so long,
To finally open up and smile.

Smile once more, because of what I did,
No more, are those saddened thoughts.

I feel those arms, as they close around me,
Trying to keep me safe.

Your fox feels the warmth,
He feels everything you want him to.

No more anger, no more sorrow,
For your fox cries for love.

A little spark of happiness,
Lighting up your own darkness.

I call to you one last time,
Before you close your lips around mine.

Your fox cries for you,
My rabbit, my boy.

Those words that slip my tongue,
You seem to already know them.

Though it seems you feel no need,
No need to say them back.

One last time, I cry out,
Trying to get you to hear them.

These lips are quivering,
Shaking in wait.

Yet you steal those words from them,
As you smile.

"Aishiteru, ore no kitsune.
I will love you forever."

Tears drip off in the void,
Darkness tears itself apart.

I feel the care of the rabbit,
Who holds his crying fox.
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Comments: 2

iamthelavendereyes [2006-09-11 05:13:59 +0000 UTC]

very nice details...and nice choice of words, im not of a poem person, but very good

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loche606 [2006-09-09 05:19:34 +0000 UTC]

wow.. that was pretty powerful.. i really liked it...you did well...
-ren

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