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SecretFiri — Work in progress 2 (6/9/2012)
Published: 2012-09-07 03:27:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 98; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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The darkness ahead,rain pouring down
like a broken heart.
A faint voice
singing love songs
as the only near by
sound.
The heart
Beating so fast
as if it were
to jump out.
In the distant
a bright light,
a loud bang,
hairs standing
on their end.
The slippery glass
in which the cars
rolled through
without much problem.
Careless figures
up ahead.
Brighter lights
going in the opposite
direction.
My hands shaking.
My voice...
inaudible.
Deaf or mute?
Something wet
scrolling along
the lines of my nose.
A strange figure
displacing my own body.
Then,
ahead.
The end.
Safety.
Home.
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Comments: 1
Damn that some good use of words and flow. I can actually see and feel what your saying. Feel like a poem telling a story on face value but i can see it symbolize the feelings anxiety and loneliness. I say good job. You had me hanging on every word.
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