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I love your location portraits - I may go through some more as the evening progresses (it's 21:40...).
As you asked for "Advanced critique" I would add that the top light would have added warmth had it been turned on, you could have shot from a little lower position accenting the girls dominance, and probably not use such a large box for the light, making it more directional.
I also think a slower shutter speed (and/or larger f-stop) would have made the sunlight coming in through the window stronger in comparison with the main exposure, which would have looked more natural!
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i like the concept, though i've seen it used before. the lighting could be brighter, and whatever that is in the bottom left (a pepper?) is extremely distracting.. ;/
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