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ScarletSouls — Unjust Punishment
Published: 2010-12-08 21:05:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 182; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description herded
like cattle
a slave driver
and fear
an immense assimilation of revulsion and terror
for control is lost
a tyrannical abyss poises itself above
cracking the lightning whip
striking the vulnerable earth
with a force to move mountains
the salty seawater stirs
and assaults the weakness
of the now trembling planet
obliterating the soil of life
of soul
an iron anchor
the unyeilding escort
to drag the helpless
hopeless
to the abyssmal chasm
overflowing with indomitable fires
and hellish destruction
as the demons dance
on their unsightly graves,
and the booms of the tainted oppressors
disturb the consciousness of the desolate
there goes the innocents
they march on..

and we weep
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Comments: 2

Hello-Please [2010-12-09 11:59:38 +0000 UTC]

This is really nice, again good imagery, very dark and relentless!

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ScarletSouls In reply to Hello-Please [2010-12-09 23:15:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I wrote it during English class while reading and discussing death and it's affect on a person's outlook on life.

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