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savyriku — Blind by-nc-nd
Published: 2009-07-02 06:15:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 153; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description We split a chocolate bar
and each had a smoke under the cloudy night sky
never considering the implications.
Sometimes I wonder what life would have been like
if I'd never met him,
never let his lips meet mine.
But here I can ignore him
beneath the haze of golden tides.
Every drop counts when you're
so close to the tip top of your ability.
I let the acoustic guitar pierce the depths of my love
and heal the lesions found in so many places
in my person.
Come morning this pain will be even more glaring
but now the sky is dark;
The shades of gray become more pronounced
and perhaps a semblence of moving on is created,
Or maybe I'm just blind.
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Comments: 4

Niarlleh [2009-07-03 02:04:07 +0000 UTC]

i think i know this feeling

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poet-irish-taurus [2009-07-02 16:27:34 +0000 UTC]

It's very honest, but also very moving since it reads more like the calm before the storm, even if its a fake calm and you know what's coming, but still...

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savyriku In reply to poet-irish-taurus [2009-07-02 23:02:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. I always appreciate your comments.

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poet-irish-taurus In reply to savyriku [2009-07-04 07:43:54 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome, and thank you nfor the appreciation. Glad to hear it.

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