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ashasylum [2010-11-18 09:57:16 +0000 UTC]
great job! many thx!
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ashasylum In reply to SabakuNoHeeromai [2010-11-18 22:05:46 +0000 UTC]
ok,also you caould add more layers,if you got the time...,have you got a tablet to color?
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SabakuNoHeeromai In reply to ashasylum [2010-11-19 00:16:49 +0000 UTC]
What do you mean, add more layers? D: I just need that clarified :3 I don't have a tablet ),: I color using a marquee tool in photoshop.
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ashasylum In reply to SabakuNoHeeromai [2010-11-19 13:45:21 +0000 UTC]
i mean something similar to this:[link]
a layer for lights,one for shadows,etc.
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Dark-Momento-Mori [2010-11-17 15:08:35 +0000 UTC]
His linear is very dynamic. I like all of your coloring except for her hair. Because of the big areas of black in the linear, I can't help but feel that the yellow is a little to bright.
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SabakuNoHeeromai In reply to Dark-Momento-Mori [2010-11-17 16:19:49 +0000 UTC]
I wasn't sure if her hair was blonde anyway D: I'm waiting on Ash's feedback to see if he thinks I need to change her hair to maybe brunette or something. But thank you :3 Anything else?
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Dark-Momento-Mori In reply to SabakuNoHeeromai [2010-11-17 18:27:30 +0000 UTC]
I think you should experiment with shading. It looks good the way it is, but if you add shadows and highlights it will make it look more intense.
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SabakuNoHeeromai In reply to Dark-Momento-Mori [2010-11-18 03:09:55 +0000 UTC]
I have highlights in there, but I lowered the opacity and blurred it out a bit, because when they were straight brush strokes it looked funny D:
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Dark-Momento-Mori In reply to SabakuNoHeeromai [2010-11-18 23:42:11 +0000 UTC]
I see. . . I just keep getting told by all of my teachers that I need to raise my contrast of light and shadow. (make them more obvious and stuff). After I tried their suggestions my art started looking awesome, so I decided to pass on the "love".
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