SenpaisWeave [2018-04-23 22:52:23 +0000 UTC]
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This is super cute! Floating girls in cute outfits is lowkey an aesthetic of mine. Soft purples are are also a fave of mine for shading. A few things you could do to improve this, for one I'd suggest moving her over to the right a little bit so her foot isn't touching the edge of your canvas, its creating a tangent and can be very distracting. Your square you have behind her I think you should either make the border the same width all around for symmetry, or push it up to the top right corner a bit more to create a pull upwards. Her head could be a little bit smaller, and I think the eye to our right could be a little smaller as well. Theres something about her bangs just slightly going over the eye that seems a little off to me. Overall I really dig this, it could just use some adjustments with composition.
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RoyalPandemic In reply to SenpaisWeave [2018-04-24 03:28:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so so much! I agree with all of this! I wasn't happy with the overall look of her with the bangs and the head, but after awhile I just stopped messing with it haha. The only thing I'm super happy with is the coloring, I'll try to remember all of this for next time
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