FresiaX [2011-07-09 20:56:51 +0000 UTC]
wow!! this is so good c: i can really see all the hard work and love you put in to this piece! i love the eagle (or whatever the bird specie is) in the background and it really encourage the feel of wildness in the picture c: but i think the (oh my god... my brain just locked >3< i'll just call it tail) tail is a little bit long, and it may be a little bit to thick in the beginning. the bird on her hand is really cute, but i think the head may be a little bit big, and the beak should may be be bigger, and less curved ^^ but it's really cute that way! the girl in the picture looks awesome! her expression shows a calm, focused and happy inner self, and her hair fits her personality (or at least what we can see) i feel like the eyes are a little bit far apart, but it's all up to the style ^^ her hand is really good! it's _not_ to small, that is a common mistake, but i think that the palm is a little bit to short c: remember that the palm is supposed to be as long as the fingers ^^ the clothes are really good, detailed, but still not bringing the focus away from the important elements in the drawing c:
overall, a really good drawing that i think you improved much on! i love the feel you get from the picture, and i like the fact that you did it in gray, so it's not any deeply saturated colors disturbing the calm and peace in the picture! i love it and i think that this is one of your best drawings! keep up the hard work, i don't claim to be a pro or anything, i don't really have a lot of skill myself, but i got a lot of knowledge after hours and hours with reading tutorials, studying nature and anatomy. (i just gotta get that knowledge on the paper XD) but i hope you'll take what iv'e told you in to consideration when you make an other piece ^^
and if you ask me, i did not think you could pull of something as amazing as this right now, i thought it would take more practice, but you showed me that anything is possible as long as we put enough love and time in to the picture! i beautiful job! you just have to be proud of this one!
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