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Rick-a320 β Chronicles of Ancient Days-2
Published: 2012-05-21 08:40:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 3636; Favourites: 79; Downloads: 0
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Prologue : [link]01 -[link]
02 - Current
03 - [link]
Sorry in advance for the grammatical mistaskes. Actually, if you could point them out, I would be very grateful.[UPDATE: :C GOD how i couldn't see those fatal mistakes!!!]
I can't believe i had made 3 long strips of a 2 kb notepad archive. Gotta write what's next!
What you guys think about the Luna-Celestia interaction. I tried to portray as Luna being the one who holds the royal demeanor, while Celestia is the one who holds the emotional pillar. I really hope I could express that...instead of the Sisterly affection of the last part.
Hope you like it, and see ya next time folks, hope to be soon
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And this is the moment where I practically stopped the reading and "flipped the table" - Celestia and Luna is blatantly OOC. They just easily could be replaced by some OC alicorns.
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damn, why the hay did i keep thinking of other things!?
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Daww.. Huh. Diabeetus didn't...!
AAGH. MAH PANCREAS IS FAILING... HRRRKK--!
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also in the box with Celestia all zoomified, I'm pretty sure i should be "Why is THERE so much doubt in you." Or you coild be Yoda and say "In you Luna......Why is there so much doubt?"
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o_o Indeed, the "is" before the "there" xD. Thanks for pointing it out
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I think your intention went well, but may I suggest Luna say something like "C'mon, we're supposed to do royal business!"
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Actually I'm very cautious with which titles does Star Gazer name luna and celestia. You know, since I believe that they're still not "rulers" of equestria
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Oh okay. Just an idea. Thanks for clarifying!
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Ooooh, this is good, keep em comming! Wanna read more.
I love this stuff
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Yes,way beyond awesome and cool!
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I like this comic series. The idea behind it seems really intriguing and I'm interesting in what happens next. The Luna/Celestia interaction is gold and I want more
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Hehe, yeah, i already asked a friend of mine who's more versed on english (ain't our mother language, but he had lived on the US) to proofread the strips
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Oh yeah, it's a really good comic so far and I'm really excited to see the next installment! If you ever need a little more help with grammar or something, I can be of assistance.
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Your are silly artist you told me it would take a while ,and yet a few days later bamn you got another update. I certainly keep looking forward to seeing more of these. x3
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Oh...well. It took me 8 days? lol, i don't know your measure of "take a while"
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a month would be a lot my talented friend. For your amazing comic to update once a week makes me super happy x) sorry for the odd question but by any chance do you accept commissions?
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Sure dude, send me a note
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I reiterate: Snuggly Celestia is best Celestia.
Oh, and "Magi" is plural for "Mage" or "Magus". You should use the singular.
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Ando pensando, creo que te mandarΓ© los strips antes de subirlos con el favor de que me cheques la ortografia x3
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It would be my pleasure.
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Wait!?
His costumes seems awfully farmiliar... hmmm... I can't put my hooves on it... hmmm... OH IT'S STARSCROLL THE BEARDED! AM I RIGHT
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You mean StarSwirl? It was my intention, but since (apparently) he's too way from the past it wouldn't make any sense in the story. And since i got half the thing already drawn, I just decided to give another name to that character. Though he belongs to a order that is named after this known StarSwirl
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His awfully similar to Starscroll the Bearded
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