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retorra — Dark Side
Published: 2014-08-20 18:14:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1373; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 0
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Description There's another side of me
A side I barely show
It's my dark side
My shadow
And my pride

The time I showed it to my friends
They were shocked, worried
Even surprised
I will tell you what they said
Decide for me
If these are what you call
Good friends

One said 'just be happy'
One said 'that isn't true!'
One said ' but I've got it much worse'
One said 'don't be annoying'
One said nothing at all
Only One listened
That could be you

This is my dark side
The one that tells the truth
It makes me write
It keeps my dreams
It is everything I have
But no one knows
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Comments: 21

youngandhopeless89 [2014-08-24 02:03:28 +0000 UTC]

you took the words out of my mouth. everyone has a dark side, writing keeps me sane and my dark side at bay. great poem

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retorra In reply to youngandhopeless89 [2014-08-25 05:09:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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kira997 [2014-08-22 13:01:43 +0000 UTC]

*quietly appreciates this*  

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retorra In reply to kira997 [2014-08-22 18:48:08 +0000 UTC]

:3 <3

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Alessiah [2014-08-22 09:45:45 +0000 UTC]

Amazing. Just...amazing

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retorra In reply to Alessiah [2014-08-22 18:48:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!!!

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zukopie [2014-08-21 15:05:20 +0000 UTC]

How maliciously lovely

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retorra In reply to zukopie [2014-08-21 18:08:15 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you!

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zukopie In reply to retorra [2014-08-21 18:09:03 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome !!

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TMaR18 [2014-08-21 02:48:11 +0000 UTC]

I love this. Every word had me wishing and waiting for more!

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retorra In reply to TMaR18 [2014-08-21 18:07:45 +0000 UTC]

:3

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TMaR18 In reply to retorra [2014-08-22 12:47:36 +0000 UTC]

 

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x-Trin-x [2014-08-21 00:16:51 +0000 UTC]

Love the second stanza. Beautiful poem

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retorra In reply to x-Trin-x [2014-08-21 18:07:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Solace-in-Shadows [2014-08-21 00:10:40 +0000 UTC]

I love this.

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retorra In reply to Solace-in-Shadows [2014-08-21 18:08:00 +0000 UTC]

I am very pleased to hear that

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kwikdraw [2014-08-20 18:36:19 +0000 UTC]

Let's be dark
Together.

Let us fuse
In the night.

Be darkness.
Be as one.

Darkest love.
Deepest love.

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Be dark with me, sweetie. -KD.

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retorra In reply to kwikdraw [2014-08-20 18:43:22 +0000 UTC]

That is very, very, very beautiful :3

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kwikdraw In reply to retorra [2014-08-20 19:38:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, sweetie. Let that fuse with your beautiful poem.

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retorra In reply to kwikdraw [2014-08-21 18:04:03 +0000 UTC]

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kwikdraw In reply to retorra [2014-08-21 18:09:02 +0000 UTC]

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