Phanto-Sardonyx [2018-03-13 00:00:23 +0000 UTC]
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Ajem... Well, it's a sugestible work. From a quick point of view, it's good for those who like this kind of content. But on a critical point of view, I feel that there are things that do not convince.
The sexy theme that you try to capture in the picture is well represented and fulfills its goal to make the present character sexy. The pose and hence the anatomy are well developed to certain points that I will touch soon. The overall impact implies that this is a drawing made very well with basic resources. Although in the section of Lineart, you can see that there are lines that go too straight when they have to go a little more curved, especially where body parts are gathered (more specifically, breasts and legs), And some other lines do not define the difference between the body and the bra.
And on the anatomy in greater depth, it is good that you make changes to improve "aspects", but it takes into account the relativity between them so that it generates a better impact. between height and thickness.
So. That would be all I would have to say. I won't say anything about the colors because they're based on the original series.
Good job. But I feel you can improve even more.
PD: I'm not familiar with this type of work, but of course, I am tolerable since this likes it or not, it's great. Except to come to exaggerate certain attributes.
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