Clicketyclickclick [2015-07-28 12:26:14 +0000 UTC]
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This is a pretty good photo. From an aesthetics perspective, I like the posture of the bear. It makes it seem human like and the expression on its face makes it look thoughtful. I think one of the interesting aspects of photographing animals is that how often they end up looking so human. This helps us empthaise with them.From a technical standpoint, it is a good photo but there are certain things which could have been done to make it a great photo. One off hemp is the richness of the colour. It seems a little drab. Maybe the sunlight could have been the factor. Also, the photo could have been cropped a bit to remove some of then useless information being provided to the viewer. For example, on the left and top part of the photo. Overall, nice work. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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Ravenith In reply to Clicketyclickclick [2015-07-31 10:10:12 +0000 UTC]
First of all, thank you very much for taking your time to write a critique. I can understand that the photo may seem dull, especially when it comes to the colours and this photo is actually ongoing a new edit, so the new version will be up soon. However, I won't crop the left side of the image, I'd rather move it a bit more to the right, so there's a bit more information on the right side. Otherwise the image might look a bit too cropped and I don't really want all the focal points to be in the middle I will overview your critique when I do start the new edit of the photo and think about some of the stuff you pointed out. Thank you once again
Clicketyclickclick In reply to Ravenith [2015-07-31 13:34:34 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome and I wish you best of luck. Please do show me the new photo.
Ravenith In reply to Clicketyclickclick [2015-08-04 14:19:31 +0000 UTC]
I will
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Suzannesphotos [2015-07-29 18:14:15 +0000 UTC]
Great shot!
Ravenith In reply to Suzannesphotos [2015-07-31 10:11:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Suz!
musicisthenewspeech [2015-07-28 15:58:22 +0000 UTC]
Paint me like your French girls ~
philipphuber [2015-07-28 13:27:06 +0000 UTC]
Awesome shot! Great work!
Ravenith In reply to philipphuber [2015-07-31 10:12:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!
Mouselemur [2015-07-28 12:11:56 +0000 UTC]
Really nice photo I look forward to seeing photos of those new bear cubs
Ravenith In reply to Mouselemur [2015-07-31 10:12:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much I'm still editing them, but they will be up soon!
Mouselemur In reply to Ravenith [2015-07-31 14:47:44 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome