Comments: 11
fireswallowtanager [2015-09-14 03:31:11 +0000 UTC]
Each of the character's personality bled the paper with different colors, such a huge variety of colors. x333
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chicoARTS [2015-07-26 23:41:06 +0000 UTC]
A great story from beginning to end! And that vicious fight felt like a mini war with beams and punches flying all over the place.
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wedward45 [2015-07-23 18:55:27 +0000 UTC]
...suddenly, the short story on my Team App feels woefully inadequate.
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amgenesis [2015-07-21 03:45:55 +0000 UTC]
The fighting descriptions in this are so fun sounding. I'm all excited about these characters ^__^
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rain-dare In reply to amgenesis [2015-07-21 05:18:35 +0000 UTC]
Fights scenes are a challenge, so this comment really made my night, thank you!
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Uruboros [2015-07-16 03:44:07 +0000 UTC]
Nice job on this intro story. It has a lot of fun interactions between the characters.
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TimeturnerJasmy [2015-07-16 01:30:10 +0000 UTC]
Wow, very well written. Good job! This group really is off for a great start!^^
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GelemPaws [2015-07-15 22:34:24 +0000 UTC]
ouo
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rain-dare In reply to GelemPaws [2015-07-16 00:00:17 +0000 UTC]
I hope you liked the story!
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GelemPaws In reply to rain-dare [2015-07-16 00:45:30 +0000 UTC]
I did! Great writing!
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