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Published: 2009-05-08 04:51:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 752; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 5
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Description A scene from my novel~!
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Walking out of his bedroom, Jack gracefully tied his hair up into a side ponytail and barretted the stragglers up on the other side. Ara watched in amazement the ease with which Jack utilized one of those damn stretchy loopy things. He touched his giant knot absentmindedly. He then purposefully began tugging on it in random spots, trying to free his tresses.

Jack soon took notice of the struggle, and motioned with the universal, ‘NO DON’T GO THERE OH GOD STOP WHAT YOU’RE DOING!’ two-handed wave. He examined the labyrinth of hair and elastic. How in tarnation had he even configured this in the first place? This called for drastic measures. Jack got the peanut butter.

Ever the proud destroyer of gooey messes in a child’s hair, it was the last ditch effort before the scissors were introduced to the situation. Scissors are never one’s first choice – they are notoriously bad company. They’ll dazzle you with their fun colors and shiny metal, and let’s not forget those lefty-friendly shapes. Then WHAM-BANG! You’ve got a nasty gash, of which you remember neither being warned of, nor requesting. It takes a lot to get those fellows to stay in the lines; they can turn on you in a moment’s notice.

Upon seeing a knife covered in an unknown brown substance approaching him, Ara brightly started backing away slowly.

“Mat an tœm pumireem!” he exclaimed. No effect.

Jack was not easily swayed. Ara desperately grasped at his hair with his long fingers. Loops of hair flopped this way and that in a flurry of motion. The peanut butter drew closer with every snap of elastic. Jack’s shadow loomed over the redhead’s frantic movements. The brown goo moved past Ara’s face. It had nearly reached the tangled hair.

Ara’s hand suddenly flew outward, arm outstretched toward his aggressor. He was on his knees, panting in terror, clutching an intact black hair tie in hand. Jack smiled sweetly and grasped the hair tie. It was slipped into his pocket, and the peanut butter returned to its confinement in the plastic jar. The red cap of doom sealed the fate of our foiled hero, trapped in darkness until once again its power was called upon. Or until there was a piece of toast with warm butter on it and a jar of sweet jelly waiting to join our hero in a feat of culinary genius. Either way, it went back to the cupboard.


(C) Rachel Chapman.
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Comments: 15

Starfish2o [2011-12-16 21:17:33 +0000 UTC]

Lol the description is pretty much like the comic and the comic confused me....lol sorry i'm not very smart. Hehe

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Radishes In reply to Starfish2o [2011-12-17 23:11:55 +0000 UTC]

oh it's ok The red-head is an alien and he got a hair tie tangled in his hair. He saw the green-head put his hair up easily, and then fretted over the one stuck in his hair, and tried to take it out. Fearing that he'd make it worse, the green-head told him to stop and tried to decide how best to get the hair-tie out safely. He decided that scissors would be too dangerous (someone could get cut!) and so decided to use peanut butter to get it out - after all, peanut butter gets gum out of hair, why not hair ties? (He has very fault logic XD) The red-head, though, being an alien, does not understand what the green-head is saying, and starts to freak out when he sees the green-head advancing on him. Just at the last moment, right before the peanut butter gets on his hair, the red-head manages to get the hair tie out (but he's so exhausted he feels like he's going to drop dead from the struggle!). Then the green-head puts the peanut butter away, as it's no longer needed. XD I hope that helps!

Thanks for the comments!

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Starfish2o In reply to Radishes [2011-12-19 01:17:35 +0000 UTC]

Lol ty! That definetly clears things up! Lol I love it! Super cute comic! Lol and very funny! You should definetly make more! ;D

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Starfish2o [2011-12-15 01:54:49 +0000 UTC]

Lol is it me or is it kind of confusing? I'm guessing that the red headed person wanted to do the same as the green headed person, and then the green headed person threated them with peanut butter? Am I correct? or totallly lost? Lol anyways if i'm correct I love it's a funny and cute comic!

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Radishes In reply to Starfish2o [2011-12-16 18:53:45 +0000 UTC]

The text in my description explains it all

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gumani [2009-06-29 19:25:33 +0000 UTC]

aww i wanna read more of this comic

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Radishes In reply to gumani [2009-06-30 16:29:52 +0000 UTC]

well the novel's done... but I got discouraged when I posted some of it not long ago and no one commented :C so i took it down cause it was depressing me!

I'm glad you like this though~

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gumani In reply to Radishes [2009-06-30 16:43:19 +0000 UTC]

awww thats pretty sad! but its still the cutest novel!
i will be looking forward to more in the future hopefully! (and hope u get good feedback!)

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Radishes In reply to gumani [2009-06-30 16:49:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks <3 I'll send you a link if I upload it again

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stonepineapple [2009-05-09 01:37:01 +0000 UTC]

aww this was one of kelly's "assignments that neverwere"

I still love this

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Radishes In reply to stonepineapple [2009-05-09 04:00:49 +0000 UTC]

LOL yes.
thank you~!!

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horusrogue [2009-05-08 14:14:39 +0000 UTC]

Truly unsettling.

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Radishes In reply to horusrogue [2009-05-08 18:33:11 +0000 UTC]

I'll never trust another hairtie again.

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steelbanana [2009-05-08 04:59:18 +0000 UTC]

Jack has to be the cutest thing ever. Peanut butter has been doing quite some damage lately!

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Radishes In reply to steelbanana [2009-05-08 05:00:02 +0000 UTC]

haha I love this boy~
yes, yes it has!

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