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quiet-eyes — Dispare

Published: 2003-09-28 10:25:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 327; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 93
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Description I swam amid a thousand crying eyes
That could not see
But witnessed everything.

My fingers slid between tears
And found sorrow laced in my bones
With thousand sighs whispering.

It was a chill touch that drove me home,
Past my protests as I wanted to sleep
In warmer arms with my faded heart.
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Comments: 6

blueishmagenta [2004-02-29 14:41:46 +0000 UTC]

OMG thats awesome! definatly a !

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firefae [2004-02-10 02:58:54 +0000 UTC]

very very good.. i love it.. very sad.. but.. it's spelled "despair".. not "dispare" and you might wanna make it.. "with A thousand sighs whispering".. but that doesn't really matter.. either way works great.. wonderful job though.. beautiful

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chezza-t18 [2003-09-29 08:53:32 +0000 UTC]

sad and simply stunning!

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freya86 [2003-09-28 11:58:37 +0000 UTC]

OMG, this is great, Awesome. Fantastic. It expresses so many emotions and so vividly that the picture seems more than real.

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dipped-in-hunni [2003-09-28 10:33:42 +0000 UTC]

ohh its sad yet simply beautiful
love the picture..that is def dispare!
great write

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ketrafc [2003-09-28 10:27:31 +0000 UTC]

thats very beautiful. awesome artwork.

Ket

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