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Published: 2008-06-10 04:03:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 1463; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Edit//11.06.08//Page1+Page2: coloured/inked/finished
This is not about cutting or depressive issues. It's about forgetfulness and embarrassingly avoidable pain.
also: HAPPY BIRTHDAY ~NaiadSees //edit
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This is part one of a two-page joke (it's inked/coloured/done at my blog). I still feel awkward about uploading comic stuff here 'cause I'm such a 'noob' (lol; you kids and your hip, young, slang words) XD;
euh...although, honestly, this is more of a notice than a deviation
;;; But I don't do this often so you can totally forgive me, right? 8Dif you watch my gallery, but not my journal:
there's a Literature/Photography/Drawing, etc. contest going on
if you read my journal but don't check my scraps:
the free sketches I offered in my journal can be found in scraps
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That frickin took you forever to respond to.
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heh heh, the amount of time the cutlery thing happens to people in our flat...
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I'm glad you found it funny! XD
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hahahha this totally ROCK :< the expressions are priceless and I love the bright, colorful color (yeah) and those spaghetti arms
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thanks!! I was worried about the colours being too much (I really like bright colours, but I tend to stick to 'safe/neutral/boring colours' lol). I'm glad you like them.
mes bras sont vraiment comme Γ§a! ~('u' )~ *faible* hΓ©hΓ©
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LMAO! Priceless! "Cutting yourself Isn't the answer" xDDD
I love it even more, +fave for you, m'dear!
One concrit:
You may want to make the transition of time/other location a bit more obvious. Perhaps by using different hues, tones or colors to taht of the present time/present location? Or maybe by making the tear in between the panels a bit more drastic.
This is just talking from what I learned in class. But have clear that I LOOOOVED it
Take this as advice from a friend that wants you to be even better
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XD haha thanks so much Elenath!~
I'm glad you mentioned it! I think I generally have a problem with pacing and I couldn't figure out how to solve it (trial and error method! haha). Usually it's fine in the sketch then as I add/change things while inking and colouring I mess up the pacing.
I'll definitely pay attention to stuff like that in future (and hopefully figure out the best way to fix it in this comic)!
I think it's difficult because that second layer of panels on the second page is odd to "break up", but it NEEDS to be broken up to fix the pacing!!
I like your suggestion about changing the tones though. So I'll probably try something with that.
*oh gosh, I ramble* XD;;
Thanks so much for the help!!
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oh snix you would do that wouldn't you lolol
bey but that starbucks dude was all up in ur business! bey maybe he likes you
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LOL He lookin' to get beat up, is what! Rudely asking people about their battle scars!! >8C hum!
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lol; she's no emo
Part 1
Part 2
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LOL do I see arm-cuts??
I LOVE sketches <3 and yours are one of my faves.
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lol; you doooo, but there's a perfectly good (non-emo) reason! XD;;
!!
Part 1
Part 2
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D8( "WHAT!?"
hehe, thanks vespariaβ₯ XD
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I love your wacky character designs.
It adds to the humor really well!
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