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PrinceSsCarmilla — A Fleeting Light
Published: 2012-02-28 18:39:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 835; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 6
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Another poem, the photo once again is not mine, it pertains of Syd Barrett again, I tried writing about him solely of him...I hope it makes sense, somehow! I need to read poetry, submerse myself in it and then I'll be able to write better, hopefully.Oh bright star
With all my might
In reaching you
I have lost my sight
I tremble, tear, and fight
Was it worth it
All this night
For all this night?
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Comments: 28
aww thank you! 
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i got the meaning ^^
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thank you for the support my dear friend! 
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there's always time to improve as well *-* and don't worry i think it's good
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aww thank you...you're so right...if there wasn't then we'd be stagnating! That's like dying! I hope that never happens to me...I'd rather physically die than spiritually!
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exactly. 
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*snuggles sweet little angelic Syd* I love you, Syddy-baby *sniffles*.
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aww how cute! Me too! Let's encircle him and enfold him forever!!!!
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And give him eternal joy!....
....and tushie-squeezies!
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I can always leave it up to you to make me smile...thanks honey...I appreciate it a lot!
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Did you like the poem? Could I add it to your group? Do you think it's too gloomy, dark?
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Yes, you can add it in! 
But I don't think it's too gloomy; it definitely has a somber tone, but nothing too bad.
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oh that's nice...thank you!!!!
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Right back at you!!!
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I fear you didn't read my depressing poem...did you like it?
This photo of Syd makes my heart leap...he's SOOOOO HOTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!
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Yes, I read it and it's very somber. And I agree about that photo, too. He looks so sweet & sensitive & broken & vulnerable. Poor little fuzzy angel, all scruffy & stinky & sweet. Poor little guy. It was a very dark time when those were taken (some photos from that shoot are rather disturbingly sad cuz he's so sickly).
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I love writing about depressing things...I'm by nature a manic depressive.
Poor Syddie....I just want to hold him until I die!
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Melancholy can be pleasurable in an odd way...provided it's combined with the light & hope in the end...
Otherwise, it's just soul-crushing nihilism...I hate that!
I prefer my gloom & doom bittersweet.
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Yeah you're right...but I still love crying..pain can be strangely uplifting...at least different from boredom...I know, I need help! But nothing is better than horror...my FAVORITE genre
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It's a catharsis thing. You feel melancholy & you let it out.
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It's better than keeping it bottled in, right? I know that if I don't I start to get asfxiated by it. I hope I'm not annoying you or anything...I always have that great fear of annoying or angering people... If I am I do apolagize...just ignore me when I do that.
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