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Published: 2008-12-02 04:32:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 1553; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 16
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Description Posting this because if I don't the Warden will have my ass 8C -gooddog-

I present for your enjoyment Phinehas Tak, or Phin, a new foreign student on the grounds of the Delta Force academy. Representing the prosperous of Egypt, he's the son of the head of a large religious base in the country. Being of high status he's grown up with many servents and even slaves to do his whims for him.

He has an insanely bubbly feminine personality in both speech and gesture, overly friendly and sweet, even when saying the most horrible things. He has a true serpents tongue in that everything he says can come out smooth as silk, when it should in fact hit the listener like low grade sandpaper to their cornea. Double takes come frequently when talking to Phin, as he has a way of saying horribly offensive, often racially/religiously charged things in only the sweetest ways, usually with a friendly and warm expression on his face.

Although he is normally very sweet in mannerism, despite what lies behind his words, the moment you manage to perturb him enough, it becomes blatantly apparent. All the sweet and friendly mannerisms go out the door, and his true personality is revealed. Opened eyes and a popped hood are how you know you've done something very wrong, or you should quickly head in another direction. His mannerisms quickly become far more harsh, his voice less bubbly and all fluidity to his voice quickly turns from kind and charismatic, to downright disturbingly smooth and malicious. He will usually become violent and rash, ready and more than willing to assault both verbally and physically to get his point across.

Due to his upbringing, he's insanely racist or... well.. speciesist I suppose. Having been raised to think as such, he's in the firm belief that all Rodents and Invertebrates are in fact inferior species, who's use at very best is that of either slaves and servants, 'entertainment', labour, or live sacrifice to their God, among other things.

He is 3/4ths Banded Egyptian Cobra, 1/4th Egyptian Asp [Horned Viper]. He is indeed venomous but has a great deal of control over the lethality of his bite, ranging from that of an asp's venom (which causing swelling, hemorrhaging, necrosis, nausea, vomiting and hematuria... yeah, this dick will make you piss blood)
to that of a weakened but still very deadly Egyptian Cobra's venom (Definitely not the time to avoid going to the Headmaster for medical help, assuming you can get there before the neurotoxins set in...).

He is the son of a blue eyed Leucistic Banded Egyptian Cobra with almost golden markings, who holds great status back in his country. His father (Pictured in the bottom right), Baruti Tor, is quite essentially the 'ope' to the religion he stands as a single prophet for. While an oddly war based religion (think 'All for the greater good!), the religion is comprised of inane rituals, sacrifice, repentance threw penance, offerings, social and racial status, and the blind faith in their leader, Baruti, the chosen one their God-like deity speaks to, and through. The religion while mainly nation based, does have multiple other factions world wide, but it is most prominent and fallowed out to the extreme within their country. While on somewhat affiliated with the local government, the constantly growing numbers for this fear tactic cult like religion is a concern amongst surrounding nations. I know its broad, but more will be revealed on the basis of this religion when the time is necessary~

He got the majority of his looks from his father, all be it his are less trustworthy and innocent, and in comparison his charisma is lacking, but regardless his father has taught him well.

Oh yes, and despite his appearance and how he speaks, he is in fact classified as a bully, and one to be avoided at all costs at that...



Believe it or not there IS more but my brain is going to BUST having just sat down and shat this all out right now 8C Im afraid to re-read all of this just to find its inane rambling about nothing, since I haven't slept in two days now and.. well Im just someone who shouldn't write without sleep 8C I hope I haven't made your eyes bleed with all this...

TL;DR -
He's a new bully from egypt who acts like a fruit unless pissed off where he's a malicious religious dick. He hates small mammals and invertebrates, seeing them as servants at best, but usually lower than dogs. His dads the motherfucking pope as it were. You don't want to tick him off, or probably run in to him at all. When his hood is up, gtfo.

THE END

Phin, Baruti, and art Belong to
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Comments: 23

SquidGames [2010-03-28 11:44:11 +0000 UTC]

really cool concept!

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Sludgee [2009-02-07 07:50:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow, what a cool character. Interesting (and non-sue-ish!) personality, not to mention I can't stop gazing at him. ._.

Awesome.

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Candy2021 [2008-12-04 22:53:17 +0000 UTC]

oooh a prince how wicked!!! I LOVE him so much! and I'm so happy to see delta force stuff it seemed to kinda die off for awhile huh?

he looks awesome I LOVE his hood-skin deisgn that's so wicked awesome!

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JezrielXIII [2008-12-03 03:40:05 +0000 UTC]

His personality seems like he'd get along with Dymas XD;;
I pictured them having a tea party..then Tor calling poor Dy a cow. ;~;

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poultrymancy In reply to JezrielXIII [2008-12-04 13:37:21 +0000 UTC]

Lol srsly xD? Dymas never struck me as the sort of Elitest Racist passive aggressive hot top type

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JezrielXIII In reply to poultrymancy [2008-12-05 03:13:45 +0000 UTC]

No
Dymas is just REALLY friendly.

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Celliwig [2008-12-02 12:36:30 +0000 UTC]

He's freaking AWESOME. o__o I love his design. fjdsalk his face, it's so COOL. Agggh. And I usually can't stand snake-people. But holycrap, Rei, this guy is fantastic. I love him. ;o; DRAW HIM MOAR PLZ, IT MAKES SAGA HAPPY. <3
-fav'd for epic awesomeness of character design-

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poultrymancy In reply to Celliwig [2008-12-02 22:37:01 +0000 UTC]

Awwr thaaanks ;u; And Saga is the anti snake peoples D Any particular reason, like, just don't like snakes or their just over done/not really snake people at all O3O? I unno, I'm very picky with my anthro snakes and 'Nagas' personally xD

And worry not, Moar will be done of Phin just because he's fun as all hell to draw |D

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Celliwig In reply to poultrymancy [2008-12-02 23:48:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I LOVE snakes. I catch them all the time in the summer. XD It's mostly nagas that I don't like. But I haven't seen any interesting snake people before Phin. So when I see lame snake people I group them with nagas and think "bleh, crappy snake-thing characters"

I've always loved snakes. I think they're so cute. ;o; Er...well, the little ones around here, not the venomous ones.
Those are cool from a reasonable distance, behind glass. XD

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poultrymancy In reply to Celliwig [2008-12-03 02:23:38 +0000 UTC]

;U; you make Rei a happy happy lady <3 See, my whole love came from working at a reptile zoo, and just working on and off with reptiles since I was 17, and catching them constantly since I was a kid >A< And yes, Rei likes her snake people to well... resemble snakes... but srsly your flattering me like no other ;A;

YOU SHOULD MAKE A SNAKE MAAAANG D8 You'd make it glorious I just know it ;^;

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Celliwig In reply to poultrymancy [2008-12-03 02:35:34 +0000 UTC]

Aww, you're so lucky. D8 We have a reptile zoo near here, I've only been there twice. I'd like to work at any kind of place like that. Even if I was just a lame tourguide or a giftshop cashier. XD

<3 Well, you deserve the flattery. XD And I may give one a shot! Phinehas' awesomeness levels are off the charts. He makes me want to give it a shot. XD

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poultrymancy In reply to Celliwig [2008-12-03 05:20:00 +0000 UTC]

Ffffff I would never be content if I couldn't handle the animals ;u; something so fufilling about turning a corner with a 15 foot snake on you and people screaming and running <3 Or walking a 6 foot monitor lizard threw the place just for, well, walkies <3 ugghhh I misss iiiiit ;A;

AND I DO NOT 8C Nao maek a snaek and du it riiiiiiiiiiiiiite

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DorkyDeetz [2008-12-02 06:26:59 +0000 UTC]

aha 'then i lol'ed"
XD

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lilpixie132 [2008-12-02 05:21:28 +0000 UTC]

Freaking epic xD

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Silvermoondragon757 [2008-12-02 04:43:55 +0000 UTC]

000000OOOOoooooo pretty Cobra I like the descriptions very nice...lol! been wacthing for a while ^_______^ now commenting Tee hee! when it comes to snakes i hate trying to make "ears" was it difficult to you ? or natural?

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poultrymancy In reply to Silvermoondragon757 [2008-12-02 22:32:07 +0000 UTC]

You mean like the ear whole? Well to be honest, snakes don't even have external ears but the side of his head looked too plane and I'd rather like him to be able to hear beyond vibrations so I just gave him a more visible lizard like ear set up xD I wouldn't say it was difficult though as I have a few other characters with ears in much the same way. I hope that helps O3O

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Centchi [2008-12-02 04:37:59 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... Nagas. FTW. Yes. x3

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poultrymancy In reply to Centchi [2008-12-02 22:21:21 +0000 UTC]

Lol xD I'm honestly still unsure if I consider him a Naga or just an Anthro snake since he isn't supposed to be human but yes, snake peoples are delishus c: <3 Btw how you feeeelin D

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Centchi In reply to poultrymancy [2008-12-02 23:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Nyahaha! I used to love Nagas... Still do actually. Yay snake people! 8D *flails*
I still hurt. :'c

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poultrymancy In reply to Centchi [2008-12-03 02:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Oooi you and me are like shark week sisters ;A; I get the whole crippling pain and vomiting every time also, and I can't take meds because I vomit more, and I can't go get help because I can't even sit up and...dfsgsfh -wails- ;^; wimminz get no breaks...

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Centchi In reply to poultrymancy [2008-12-03 02:26:45 +0000 UTC]

FGHDJXNHCBVGHD! Yes, exactly! Do you get a sharp pain in your lower spine, and you can't walk 'cause it feels like your legs are being stabbed with a knife a million times until you go numb? Dx> *flails*

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poultrymancy In reply to Centchi [2008-12-04 13:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Mmmmmmmbasically ;^; we can be dying fetal balls of pain together <3

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Centchi In reply to poultrymancy [2008-12-04 16:05:15 +0000 UTC]

Okay. ;u; *jumps into your arms*

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