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poisonDevil — A Cocaine Nosebleed
Published: 2004-05-24 16:10:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 1184; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 232
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Feed me deathwith tainted tools
And focus like eyelids, fixating the crawl
Grip hard the choke chain
and wait for the bleed
Involved in the process, swallow the seed
Breathe in the calm
and wait for the storm
wait in the limelight till life lines are drawn
Seal me with fingers
and swallow me whole
chew up your insides and do what you're told
breeding your deadlinks
just scream at the walls
push down a new wave and heighten the fall
Feeding my bloodlines
ill take out your eyes
Rip back your neck now and choke down my lies
The room now is spinning
my cradle, the cieling
pull me out quickly or drag me out screaming
a cocaine nosebleed
my nails feel cold
pull at my dead-strings while new lines unfold
Treading this wasteland
left here to play
Its over so slowly so here now I wait
and now that its over
and you're not for the sky
ill twist you from inside and bleed youre spine dry
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Comments: 12
Wow this is a gr8 submission! 
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Beautiful.
Makes me remember a lot of fucked up days.
-BoB
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Wow! - i never knew you could write like this. i dont know what to say -
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Breathe in the calm
and wait for the storm
wait in the limelight till life lines are drawn
Seal me with fingers
and swallow me whole
chew up your insides and do what you're told
Perfect. Seriously. I'm impressed.
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Sorry if I sounded hostile before, I was just confused.
Cheers, there were lots of drafts of this peom, I finally got it how i wanted it.
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In addition to my last comment, i wrote smeting similar to this a few years ago - i might post it if i can find it. Its from a slightly different angle but some of the words you used appear in my one too - its called Crystal Panorama -
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Cool, id like to hear it
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I will post it up here as soon as i find it - its on paper scribbled somwhere -
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