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Poetrymann In reply to ??? [2012-12-16 03:07:25 +0000 UTC]
Another great one - many thanks!
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toxic-nebulae [2012-10-30 01:48:44 +0000 UTC]
I'd recommend adding a comma after "strangers" and changing the last period to a question mark. Other than that, it's a lovely piece.
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Starkpretty [2012-10-08 16:51:19 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic way to challenge the stereotype!
Lovely words. <3
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Poetrymann In reply to Starkpretty [2012-10-09 20:44:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much - I appreciate it.
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HeyThereDelilah20 [2012-10-03 17:17:49 +0000 UTC]
wow...this is beautiful....
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HourglassOfLostTime [2012-10-03 10:50:16 +0000 UTC]
If I'm not mistaken I do believe most cereal killers build up in their head a perfect world, this world is imperfect to their cookie cutter image thus they seek out to snuff them out, be it fore vengeance, pleasure.
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FailedxExperimentx13 [2012-10-02 13:15:17 +0000 UTC]
Sir, you seem to have a bit of a Criminal Minds addiction...
No, wait, that's me.
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Poetrymann In reply to hahaha789 [2012-10-09 20:33:15 +0000 UTC]
Many thanks - I greatly appreciate it!
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Poetrymann In reply to intricately-ordinary [2012-10-09 20:33:10 +0000 UTC]
You are correct on all counts. Then again, I have always found myself wondering about the lives of strangers. Thanks.
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NinjAPixiEX3 [2012-09-23 15:18:46 +0000 UTC]
Wow....That was amazing.
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Poetrymann In reply to NinjAPixiEX3 [2012-10-02 14:56:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much - I appreciate that!
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leyghan [2012-09-23 03:55:19 +0000 UTC]
I think this is my new favourite. This is simply superb!
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Poetrymann In reply to leyghan [2012-10-02 14:56:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much - I appreciate that!
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SavageInsight [2012-09-21 14:25:28 +0000 UTC]
One of the better poems I've read, and I've read some of the best
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drawitout [2012-09-21 04:08:01 +0000 UTC]
So poignant and haunting, this is wonderful writing!
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Poetrymann In reply to drawitout [2012-10-02 14:53:53 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much - I appreciate that.
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Shiver-In-Shadows20 [2012-09-21 01:45:53 +0000 UTC]
Im very impressed. This takes a look at how we see killers. The takers of life. What goes througj their mind? What would they dream of or risk throwing away when they have shed blood? It certainly wouldn't be of oceans. It would be of that moment when they watched a person drift away. They wonder if that will be how they meet their end. You painted a wonderful and thoughtful picture. Great job!
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Poetrymann In reply to Shiver-In-Shadows20 [2012-10-02 14:53:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much - I appreciate that. I am sure many of them have the same experiences as the rest of us.
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Poetrymann In reply to Leo821 [2012-10-02 14:52:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much - I appreciate that.
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Sigma-Echo-Seven [2012-09-20 04:32:01 +0000 UTC]
Was reading some poetry today out of a recent issue of The New Yorker. This was better.
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Poetrymann In reply to Sigma-Echo-Seven [2012-10-02 14:52:50 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much - I appreciate that. I am working up the nerve to send them some of my work...
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NoriMori [2012-09-20 02:48:47 +0000 UTC]
Wow.
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Poetrymann In reply to NoriMori [2012-10-02 14:52:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much - I appreciate that.
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timeraider [2012-09-20 01:33:29 +0000 UTC]
This had me pondering my own humanity, and just how fragile the line between the surface and the underneath might be.
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Poetrymann In reply to timeraider [2012-10-02 14:51:49 +0000 UTC]
It was inspired by a poem about Hitler. And while I despise the man and everything he stood for, he was at one time a child...and experienced many things the rest of us did and do.
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