HOME | DD

Po-Tait-Tree123 — Pickles
Published: 2008-01-28 04:45:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 68; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
Redirect to original
Description Swimming in a feild of pickles
well ur foot sickles
I enjoy how my feet smell
but they make me yell
    Some People, they say i am Phycotic
but i say ur idiotic
But Who doesnt like to eat ham and Jam sandwhich
me becuase it gives me a stitch
Yah, but look at the colorful, brine covered fishies swimming in a sea of green
me i have no need to see the sea or colourful colours of green
But if you wish to dream, can you close your eyes?
i dare not close my eyes, in case all my dreams dies
Then your eyes shall burn with the kiss of long needed sleep
who needs sleep when u can dream without counting sheep
Sheep can eventually die then a new mothod of time passing needs to be invented
sheep shall die but my dreams with never be invated
You lay dreamless, hopeless, and jealous of the dark
dreamless,hopless, and jealous are just words that leave their mark
Marks burn your tired soul, never granting release
release i shall never have and the tormant seems will nver ses
Robbing me of rights to that fantasy in the form of Sleep
its creeps and calls me but i never dare speck
Speech is useless when all those ears lay deaf to your words
words are just sounds that mark heavy towns
Towns flowing forth with the Rightousness of their just acts of cruelty
cruelty is all i know and now drives me to sanity
Sanity escapes those who lack the nessicity
sanity is how i feel when i lose all may humanity
Humanity Judged by those who see it unfit to follow their own steps
i follow no ones steps but those unkept
And unwritten till the edges of the page..as they fall
i feel so alone like theirs no one left at all
So we choose to end it like, all those before us, with a loss of Spirit
    Screams rip through my throat as it goes but no one can hear it
     And drift forever away.. in the feild of pickles
Related content
Comments: 4

dhuff1958 [2008-02-07 01:05:23 +0000 UTC]

This is so cool...i really enjoyed it

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Po-Tait-Tree123 In reply to dhuff1958 [2008-02-08 17:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Its pretty messed up but me and my friend had some fun writing it lol thank you for the favorite on it!!!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

WolfoftheAmarant [2008-01-29 03:05:04 +0000 UTC]

It's very solid for a collaboration. I enjoyed it past the eighth line.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Po-Tait-Tree123 In reply to WolfoftheAmarant [2008-02-04 20:17:05 +0000 UTC]

Yah soo did i! anything in the first 8 or so lines was just messing around and crap then we sorta started to get serious... it was quite a night thank you!! i will tell her you enjoyed it! she was afraid everyone would laugh after i put it on lol.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0