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CatalanoMedia [2013-09-08 23:32:59 +0000 UTC]

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I can't help bu feel her back should be up against the vehicle, while she's looking up.
The flying thing just looks much better here:
pjacubinas.deviantart.com/art/…
-but maybe you don't want it to look like it's moving so fast.
Maybe point the nose down more to make it look more dynamic and not so flat.

Matter of fact, the whole shot just doesn't seem to involving.
I barely noticed the female was there.
Maybe re-compose the shot/angle to focus on the anticipation of the female and the flying thing.

I know you put a lot of work into this, but it's just not saying for feeling anything.
No anticipation, no suspense.

If you just wanted to convey her sneaking on the flying thing (without any of the emotion I mentioned above), I feel having her in a window, or even under the vehicle would be a more intelligent choice.
-Or hey, even hiding amongst some rubble.

The bottle line is, this is"pretty enough" for a render, but that's about it.
It may even be better as a scene without the human.

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WickedPrince [2013-12-08 02:23:24 +0000 UTC]

The scene looks really cool to me, very detailed with all the debris and everything. I think AOGRAI is right though, it would help to have something indicating what the drone is looking at/for.

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AOGRAI [2013-08-27 23:42:58 +0000 UTC]

I am sure you're not quite done with the lighting?  Are you going to add the search light?  ie from the droid?  Although, I do like the scene as is; but logic tells me there should be some form of scanner-like visual should be in here.  I like the pose and lighting, it is good.

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