duckling1992 [2010-06-18 22:04:46 +0000 UTC]
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This has quite a powerful impact on anyone who views this. Your idea is original and it's nice for a change from the usual pieces which show mortality by artists following a trend rather than using their own mind for good ideas.The black and white is an appropriately chosen style for the photograph, obviously to reflect on a well-known historic event. I will criticise however on the camera-work. I would have suggested trying to centre on the track a bit more so that the Auschwitz entrance is directly perpendicular to the character in your shot (I understand that this may not have been possible if the track wasn't centred) Also, the horizon is slightly off being horizontal. I'm just curious if this was part of an effect you were aiming to get.All-in-all, this is still an outstanding piece which I can see having a lot of potential with literature based on Auschwitz.
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PhotoLiebe87 In reply to duckling1992 [2010-06-18 22:16:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your critique. IΒ΄m a starter in making this kind of pictures and your critics are very usefull! (normally I shoot animals,plants&nature).
duckling1992 In reply to PhotoLiebe87 [2010-06-18 22:19:44 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.(For a moment, I thought you meant literally shooting, then I clicked).
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