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UnKneon62 [2022-11-06 22:23:22 +0000 UTC]
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brazensix [2001-06-01 00:06:14 +0000 UTC]
Intersting piece. I like the background, but i feel that the design that overlays on it takes alot away from it. I think with a bit more work you could make it even better. Nice work though.
Mathias
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jark [2001-05-31 23:19:46 +0000 UTC]
it is very simplistic but i like it. i think that if you continue to work on this and allow it to mature through the constant nurturing that an artist needs to do on a masterpiece that this will indeed be that one day. i love the idea...keep at it!
--[ jark ]--
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yoozer [2001-05-31 20:21:12 +0000 UTC]
mwoah.. not bad, but it's the color scheme killing the thing. i'd yooze a non-stretched helvetica (all caps, emphasizing parts with bold, free yoosage of random dots - and small). plus i'd shrink the 45° thing, add a horizontal bar. furthermore, most of these pieces have a decentralized focal point, and like to deviate from the 45° scheme. i'd twist it in such a way that it gives more perspective, like looking in a tunnel. sorry for the whining, but i think you could improve the piece in that way.
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polaris [2001-05-31 20:15:46 +0000 UTC]
Pretty cool man, might wanna try adding some effects to the text, its way to plain. Also trying some diff modes on those blue crystals in the back... I'm sure u could make it look alot better...
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