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PhantomSilence44 — ..::Fractured Heart::..

Published: 2011-03-20 01:28:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 6290; Favourites: 334; Downloads: 43
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Description A story about a girl...Named Phantom...


Love...It's a hurtful thing to many...To some...It is the greatest joy on Earth...To others, it is a large burden that crushes every inch of your heart, like a boulder perched at the very tip of a high cliff, and with the slightest touch it stumbles upon the small area of your chest and splatters your heart across the cold hard pavement...Leaving nothing but a cold stone body lying under the rubble alone...Forever...

She was in love with him...Longer than she had ever loved anyone before. But there was a barrier that separated them for so long...And she didn't know how to break it...She had tried everything...Done everything she could think of to crack that barrier...But the more she tried, the harder the barrier would be to crack...The thicker it became...

And why you may ask...?


Because he was in love...With somebody else...

...

She kept a close eye on him and this 'new' lover for a long time...To see the kind of girl she truly was...To see what kind of heart she held deep within her own chest...And as time slowly passed by she began to understand that she was nothing but a monster.

Many weeks after she took the courage from that day on to try and separate them by trying to explain to the one she held dear to her heart how much of a monster this girl was...But...He wouldn't listen...He refused....And the more she tried and tried to explain...The worse it became for them...

He began to distance himself from her...And soon his 'new' love began to figure out what Phantom was trying to do...And soon later thought of many devious and sinister plans to dispose of her from both of them forever...By making him believe Phantom was the bad one and turn him against her...It became too much for Phantom...that the one she loved dearly for all those years pushed her around all because of a horrible misunderstanding...And It was all the fault of the girl who later in life...Would became his wife

After such a horrific experience...After all the pain of being pushed around, beat up, heart snatched right from her chest...Her view on everything began to take a turn for the worst...She didn't care...She hated life...Her poor tortured heart...Was lost in a deep cloud of hatred and mourn...She Left everything behind but one little faithful companion who followed her to her deathbed, without her realizing it until it was already too late...

And when the bright lights were seen not even 10 inches away, she took her last breath of life, and was flung, sliding across the dark cold painted ground, which would now and forever be a river of bloody tears...A washed memory...And a broken heart, never to make it's sad musical beat...Ever again...


Art/Phantom (c) ~PhantomSilence44
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Comments: 56

SouthItalysLilPet [2012-09-13 22:59:05 +0000 UTC]

so prittyfull its to die for !!!

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to SouthItalysLilPet [2012-09-15 06:05:23 +0000 UTC]

Awn, thank you.

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SouthItalysLilPet In reply to PhantomSilence44 [2012-09-15 15:07:03 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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Akahanachi [2012-08-03 22:19:04 +0000 UTC]

I want her clothes there so pretty! just wash em bit

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to Akahanachi [2012-08-05 15:25:03 +0000 UTC]

Heh, lols. c:

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SnatchMind [2012-08-03 13:53:01 +0000 UTC]

Its so awesome!!!!! you can really identify with her!

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to SnatchMind [2012-08-05 15:25:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! Cx

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SnatchMind In reply to PhantomSilence44 [2012-08-05 16:37:39 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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moscowandrussia22 [2012-06-13 03:46:43 +0000 UTC]

SO GORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!AWSOME

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to moscowandrussia22 [2012-06-13 23:38:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!!

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cutie-poo [2012-05-23 00:48:47 +0000 UTC]

wow this is very good..and dark.....i love it

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to cutie-poo [2012-05-24 15:19:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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cutie-poo In reply to PhantomSilence44 [2012-05-26 01:36:14 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome

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valomer [2011-09-22 03:13:21 +0000 UTC]

powerful, especially for those who can relate with the story

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to valomer [2011-09-22 15:57:16 +0000 UTC]

Awn, thank you.

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darilhowell [2011-08-03 10:25:43 +0000 UTC]

WOW! story was nicely put. THUMBS UP!

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to darilhowell [2011-08-03 22:03:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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N0XI0US--GLiTCH [2011-07-24 15:51:23 +0000 UTC]

Only one error: it's should be its in the last sentence.
Excellently sad story/pic. ;A;

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to N0XI0US--GLiTCH [2011-07-24 18:40:34 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thanks. xD;
Thank you! c:

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Amberstar911 [2011-07-17 00:20:26 +0000 UTC]

I know how that girl felt...I loved someone to and he went for someone else... T^T But it was on here and the girl he love's now I hate her so much even tho she dosen't even know who I am...

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to Amberstar911 [2011-07-17 00:55:31 +0000 UTC]

Ah...D:

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Amberstar911 In reply to PhantomSilence44 [2011-07-17 03:34:26 +0000 UTC]

Ikr? But at least we are still friends! ^^

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to Amberstar911 [2011-07-17 22:19:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh. O.O That's good. :3

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DeathAngel0666 [2011-06-09 23:47:31 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to DeathAngel0666 [2011-06-10 01:25:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Sarafan206 [2011-05-14 23:26:44 +0000 UTC]

what faithful companion would that be, i wonder?

deep man.

sad, depressing, but deep.

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to Sarafan206 [2011-05-16 02:45:03 +0000 UTC]

Hehheh...Yeah...

Thank you. ^^

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Sarafan206 In reply to PhantomSilence44 [2011-05-17 00:58:18 +0000 UTC]

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Eds-Canvas [2011-03-30 04:16:03 +0000 UTC]

Sadly, that is how love turns out.. its painful to think about but its also to forget about the person who broke your heart~

This pain also makes us stronger ~ thought memories will always hunt you

you added a very vivid story, great job~!

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to Eds-Canvas [2011-03-31 01:29:57 +0000 UTC]

I know right?

I agree.

Awn, thank you!

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Eds-Canvas In reply to PhantomSilence44 [2011-03-31 01:45:50 +0000 UTC]

yeah your very welcome, I lovw your dark looking drawings~!
thanks for agreeing with me~

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to Eds-Canvas [2011-03-31 01:49:30 +0000 UTC]

Hehheh, you're very welcome buddy.

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Eds-Canvas In reply to PhantomSilence44 [2011-03-31 02:03:57 +0000 UTC]

haha im your buddy? awesome!~ xD

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to Eds-Canvas [2011-04-01 01:31:45 +0000 UTC]

^^

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SILENTCANADA [2011-03-29 21:29:43 +0000 UTC]

wow so much emotion

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to SILENTCANADA [2011-03-30 00:35:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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KSinPoint [2011-03-24 13:31:44 +0000 UTC]

Aw, Phantom~

I wish I created someone for you to talk to before it was too late
hehe <3

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to KSinPoint [2011-03-25 01:17:01 +0000 UTC]

Awn~ <3

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KSinPoint In reply to PhantomSilence44 [2011-03-25 02:26:17 +0000 UTC]

^.^

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Chinachuaaa [2011-03-20 13:31:31 +0000 UTC]

Niceeeee

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to Chinachuaaa [2011-03-20 19:27:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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jgndhdshgfisoa [2011-03-20 05:44:24 +0000 UTC]

good

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to jgndhdshgfisoa [2011-03-20 19:26:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Kittymanx3 [2011-03-20 03:34:54 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful <3

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to Kittymanx3 [2011-03-20 03:42:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! ^^

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SeraphimFeathers [2011-03-20 02:51:24 +0000 UTC]

This beautiful. It has so many feelings in it. Keep up the great work!

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to SeraphimFeathers [2011-03-20 03:42:17 +0000 UTC]

Awn, thank you!!!

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lokirules10 [2011-03-20 02:39:43 +0000 UTC]

That is so epically dark! I love it!

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PhantomSilence44 In reply to lokirules10 [2011-03-20 03:42:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

*huggle* Love ya big sisterrrr~~~ ;u;

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lokirules10 In reply to PhantomSilence44 [2011-03-20 04:06:32 +0000 UTC]

Welcome if you hadn't noticed i submitted smut if you want to read for Alarica that is.

Love you too little sis!

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