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pfoj — one strand

Published: 2003-03-30 02:35:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 938; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 59
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Description sometimes a strand
is all it takes
to lead your hand
      to me
with twists and subtle
turns down that path
of love
     and bitter memories

i find myself
all /tangled/ up
the bottom in here _lie
tied with one
knot so secure
i frayed to be
alive

the girl
       she comes
and tugs an end..
away from my
  true source
i leave
i loved
but most of all
unraveled you the most
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Comments: 3

Emilystrange123 [2003-09-27 04:12:01 +0000 UTC]

I love the way this poem flows, and the way you played wiht the formation.

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bleedingmytears [2003-09-22 04:40:08 +0000 UTC]

wow

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r-sandbox [2003-04-02 08:12:00 +0000 UTC]

wow... you have no idea how much this relates to me.

waitaminute, yeah, you prolly do since i've prolly told you heh heh.

..but seriously, great work man. i'm not usually a fan of using formatting for impact, but this time, it workds well. i like the imagery of the string and the knot... i like the mood of this piece- it's not really clear cut, which begs the question- is the girl *that* bad after all?

awesome work, man, +fav

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