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Paul-Shanghai — The Tear

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When Friendship or Love our sympathies move, 
   When Truth, in a glance, should appear, 
The lips may beguile with a dimple or smile, 
   But the test of affection's a Tear:

Too oft is a smile but the hypocrite's wile, 
   To mask detestation, or fear; 
Give me the soft sigh, whilst the soultelling eye 
   Is dimm'd, for a time, with a Tear:

Mild Charity's glow, to us mortals below, 
   Shows the soul from barbarity clear; 
Compassion will melt, where this virtue is felt, 
   And its dew is diffused in a Tear:

The man, doom'd to sail with the blast of the gale, 
   Through billows Atlantic to steer, 
As he bends o'er the wave which may soon be his grave, 
   The green sparkles bright with a Tear;

The Soldier braves death for a fanciful wreath 
   In Glory's romantic career; 
But he raises the foe when in battle laid low, 
   And bathes every wound with a Tear.

If, with high-bounding pride he return to his bride! 
   Renouncing the gore-crimson'd spear; 
All his toils are repaid when, embracing the maid, 
   From her eyelid he kisses the Tear.

Sweet scene of my youth! seat of Friendship and Truth, 
   Where Love chas'd each fast-fleeting year 
Loth to leave thee, I mourn'd, for a last look I turn'd, 
   But thy spire was scarce seen through a Tear:

Though my vows I can pour, to my Mary no more, 
   My Mary, to Love once so dear, 
In the shade of her bow'r I remember the hour, 
   She rewarded those vows with a Tear.

By another possest, may she live ever blest! 
   Her name still my heart must revere: 
With a sigh I resign what I once thought was mine, 
   And forgive her deceit with a Tear.

Ye friends of my heart, ere from you I depart, 
   This hope to my breast is most near: 
If again we shall meet in this rural retreat, 
   May we meet, as we part, with a Tear.

When my soul wings her flight to the regions of night, 
   And my corse shall recline on its bier; 
As ye pass by the tomb where my ashes consume, 
   Oh! moisten their dust with a Tear.

May no marble bestow the splendour of woe 
   Which the children of vanity rear; 
No fiction of fame shall blazon my name. 
   All I ask – all I wish – is a Tear.

Lord Byron - October 26 1806



Another mid week quickie Again this was drawn whilst sitting on an AIrbus A330 for 12 hours!

A small drawing measuring only 10cm X 10cm on Bristol Board Smooth using a range of pencils 4H through to 4B and a spot of 8B here and there.  
Focus was on the tear and its reflection on the skin.  

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Comments: 76

chrissar17 [2014-02-15 07:46:43 +0000 UTC]

Very emotive, the tear says it all... well-chosen poem...

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to chrissar17 [2014-02-17 03:07:20 +0000 UTC]

I am not necessarily a bog poem reader - however this one struck me deeply - and fits the drawing perfectly.  Thanks for the comment

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Someone-Else79 [2014-01-14 23:56:09 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work !!!

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to Someone-Else79 [2014-01-15 01:53:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you - glad you like it

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Someone-Else79 In reply to Paul-Shanghai [2014-01-15 22:52:13 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome !

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cCherrybomb [2013-12-23 14:32:50 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE your art!! How can you make it so realistic??

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to cCherrybomb [2013-12-26 12:16:43 +0000 UTC]

It would be easy to just say "Practise" so that is what I will say

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Justa-Watcher49 [2013-12-06 21:28:31 +0000 UTC]

Great job with the tear. So well done. 

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to Justa-Watcher49 [2013-12-09 02:04:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Lon

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PhotonLights [2013-12-03 19:00:44 +0000 UTC]

Looks absolutely real, well done

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to PhotonLights [2013-12-04 08:15:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you - not much of a portrait so the tear had to look as real as possible

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ulltraz [2013-11-30 03:51:57 +0000 UTC]

fantastic job!!! 

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to ulltraz [2013-12-02 02:08:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ulltraz In reply to Paul-Shanghai [2013-12-02 20:15:59 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome!!! 

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Haharius [2013-11-15 21:15:46 +0000 UTC]

beautifull

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to Haharius [2013-11-20 20:36:54 +0000 UTC]

Cheers

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Carryn [2013-11-15 02:35:56 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work.  Well done.

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to Carryn [2013-11-15 03:13:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Kandi - always appreciate your comments

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Carryn In reply to Paul-Shanghai [2013-11-20 04:09:13 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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annakoutsidou [2013-11-10 22:55:21 +0000 UTC]

Great work dear !

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to annakoutsidou [2013-11-14 07:18:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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annakoutsidou In reply to Paul-Shanghai [2013-11-15 00:04:24 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome dear

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philippeL [2013-11-10 22:14:03 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful!

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to philippeL [2013-11-14 07:18:12 +0000 UTC]

Very kind Phillippe

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SoggyShrub [2013-11-10 20:38:47 +0000 UTC]

Great work!

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to SoggyShrub [2013-11-14 07:17:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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SoggyShrub In reply to Paul-Shanghai [2013-11-14 14:35:05 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome

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danielag82 [2013-11-10 13:07:52 +0000 UTC]

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to danielag82 [2013-11-14 07:17:52 +0000 UTC]

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ArtByCher [2013-11-07 11:50:56 +0000 UTC]

The poem is perfect for this,Paul. Great work!

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to ArtByCher [2013-11-08 00:57:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks - I thought they made a great combination also

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markstewart [2013-11-07 01:18:02 +0000 UTC]

There is a great feeling of pain in that single eye Paul and the flesh tones make the highlight in the tear path and eye hightight really glow too which gives a wonderful focal point to the composition .. congrats on a very successful drawing mate

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to markstewart [2013-11-07 02:31:45 +0000 UTC]

To be honest it was a very quick drawing, I probably spent more time on planning other drawings, than I actually did on this one I wanted the tear to be the focal point, and I think it came out ok? For me it introduced me to the wonderful poem by Byron - and I hope they compliment each other - thanks for the support Mark

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markstewart In reply to Paul-Shanghai [2013-11-07 18:35:28 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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phoenix132 [2013-11-06 22:19:55 +0000 UTC]

You've captured the emotion very well, especially in the eyes

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to phoenix132 [2013-11-07 00:31:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment - I appreciate the feedback

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donotseeme [2013-11-06 20:35:53 +0000 UTC]

hard to believe this is only 10cm by 10cm . awesome! and the tear looks great. glad you didn't hit any turbulence

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to donotseeme [2013-11-07 00:30:34 +0000 UTC]

haha turbulence, too many G&T's, and people interrupting me to 'take a look' are all problems whist drawing on a plane - I do not recommend it to everyone

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Nightpark [2013-11-06 19:46:31 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic job! You truly capture and convey emotions in this one. Very well done!

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to Nightpark [2013-11-07 00:29:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks you - I think the combination works well, appreciate your comments

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Arunea8 [2013-11-06 18:09:49 +0000 UTC]

This is very beautiful.
The tear is impressive! I couldn't imagine to draw something as beautiful as your's at a size as small as 10cm x 10cm (I hope, that's a correct sentence). Was it more difficult for you to draw on a tiny spacw than on bigger ones? What do you prefer?

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to Arunea8 [2013-11-07 00:29:05 +0000 UTC]

Good question - I really enjoy the 'majesty' ' grandness' and impact a large drawing has, and I think it is a great way to learn how to spot details - but there is also something very pleasing about finishing a work in just a few hours!  The larger drawings can take weeks - even months....

whereas I can finish a small drawing in just a few hours.  This is probably why I have 5-6 drawings in various states of completion at the same time

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Arunea8 In reply to Paul-Shanghai [2013-11-07 17:56:39 +0000 UTC]

Interesting, thanks for the long answer ^^
I haven't tried to make really large pencil drawings, so I can just think about it with acrylic (and my little abilities to create something great)

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manasi3194 [2013-11-06 16:53:10 +0000 UTC]

woah! this is amazing. I love the way u highlighted the tear. its great. Its really a lovely poem. 

Great work

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to manasi3194 [2013-11-07 00:24:42 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like both, Byrons work is fantastic - I am not necessarily a lover of poetry - but I do admire his work

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mkmars [2013-11-06 15:16:25 +0000 UTC]

wow. very moving. Lord Byron's poem and your drawing fit so perfectly. really incredible work!

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to mkmars [2013-11-07 00:23:57 +0000 UTC]

It really is one of my favourite poems, and I thought the two went together very well - thanks for commenting

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George-H-Art [2013-11-06 13:52:37 +0000 UTC]

Lovely "quickie" Love the text!

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Paul-Shanghai In reply to George-H-Art [2013-11-07 00:23:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks - I love how the Poem has a single date, not sure how long it took him to write - but somehow think it may have been more than 1 day (unlike the drawing )

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MercyToNoOne [2013-11-06 13:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work!

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