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PaperJackelope — critique?
Published: 2017-09-19 16:32:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 49; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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I am in need some critique before outline stage...also ... I know the hands.. or lack there of is terrible. no need to be reminded of that.
aside from making fun of my struggle to draw hands please feel free to say mean things about me and my art!
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They are not of equal size: the girl is smaller and facing the right. For a running away movement, she has to look more to the way her whole body is moving-away from him. And he should show more of his back, if we keep that front to back run of the girl. Hope, that helped
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Thanks this helps a lot actually!
I left her small on purpose because shes not as tall as him but now that you bring it up, shes more like child sized. That's a simple fix! Thanks!
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