HOME | DD
Paladin360 — MLP: Visitor in the Great Hall
Published: 2017-09-14 05:18:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 291; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description
I am finish D: coloring is making my hand tired and colored wrong there >.> Sketching and doing the line art is easy
but not for color there >.> but then when I checking a little more in this drawing, right? I've seen something missing before I coloring it >.> anyway hope you all like it I've did try my best to add more detail in it ^^ which is don't know what to add there and look finish for me >.>Anyway here the story. It is about Saolena La Lunary or you can call her Saolene Lunary ^^ She coming from another realm and it's called Setrallia Realm. Guardian first discover them into the Guardian of Gateway before the great war begins.
You can fix my story if you want to
--------------------Story--------------------
At the great Palace in the great city. Saolena Lunary come here for a visit for her first time. She's knows they at war against there greatest enemy they had, but then she didn't care at all and wanted to see them. She bring six guard and one Captain, Aqua Lik Seka. They open there ancient spell to open the portal to there realm. They ended up middle of the forest next to the The High Mount Stronghold . They being spotted by the Void and the Over Wrath.
Aqua Seka: Your highness? you need to stay close to us *block them with her sword*
Saolena Lunary: *is sitting on the grass while watching them fighting while being calm* This is... interesting. Never seen them like this to my own world ^^
Furora Guard: *slash Over wrath warrior and finish them there magic* Please your highness, it is not safe
Saolena Lunary: Is alright. I am safe for sure ^^
Aqua Seka: *double kick and using aqua wave around her and hear them* They coming!
*5 Thunder Bolts appear to the sky. Begin to attack*
Striker Razor: *teleport on front to them with there 10 Guardian soldier* Take care of them Guardian!!! going to meet her
*10 Guardian hold them off*
Striker Razor: Saolena?! what are you doing here?
Aqua Seka: She wanted to visit what she wanted...
Striker Razor: A visit?!
Saolena Lunary: I know I'm crazy ^^ but I'm not worried. My guard and her are really strong. Which is they really wanted me to be safe ^^ but? could you show me where is your leader? I wanted to meet them ^u^
Striker Razor: Uh... ok? but please stand around me. I'll teleport to the great city and I'll contact them
Saolena Lunary: Very well ^^
Saolena Lunary and there guard being teleport to the great palace inside the great hall. When she in the Great Hall? she never seen this place is really huge for her own eyes. Including there Guard and Aqua Seka aswell.
Saolena Lunary: I-I never seen this place before
Striker Razor: Your Highness? I've being contact to them and they are on there way
Saolena Lunary: They are? ok ^^ I wanted to see this place longer...
Solner: And now you have to wait a bit longer to see our city, Your highness ^^
Striker Razor: Solner? you're here already?
Solner: Yes I am and you may leave Commander
Striker Razor: Understood my Three Guardian *solute and left*
Saolena Lunary: Solner The Three Guardian. Glad to see you ^^ I've always heard about you to my world ^^
Solner: Oh? how so ^^
Saolena Lunary: Alot of your pony kind always talking about you and other two around on my city ^^
Solner: They always talking to us alot when I heard them ^^ So why are you visit us?
Saolena Lunary: Because? *coming closer to him* I wanted to see what outside the world look like. And this? I've never seen this place before ^^ never seen how big is inside of your great city
Solner: You just did ^^ and glad you seen it. Though? you most be crazy while we at war, you know that, right?
Saolena Lunary: I know ^^
Solner: *sigh* ok lets go to see your room to stay in ^^
Saolena Lunary: Show me ^^ I would love it to see what room is look like ^u^
Solner the Three Guardian. He is showing her room where she can stay in for her visit. She's following him long hallway with banner each side with there Guardian Guard.
Solner: So how is your realm, Saolena?
Saolena Lunary: Well? it's really great ^^ watching the floating rock at my garden ^^ also I had to deal with them...
Solner: Who's them?
Saolena Lunary: You do not wanted to hear it, Solner.
Solner: Ok... So how is our first city doing?
Saolena Lunary: They doing really well. They always come visit our kingdom alot with there lovely gift ^^ They always being nice to us when we first time being friendly from another world.
Solner: That really great for them for a gift while being friendly. Just like from my past being peace. But this? everything has change. We most survive and keep fighting without anyhelp.
Saolena Lunary: Oh... but? I can help you, Solner ^^
Solner: Thanks, but no thanks. I don't wanted you to get involve. When you help us? they will find a way to invade your homeworld
Saolena Lunary: That's...? *looking away* I think you're right. I don't wanted them to invade us...
Solner: *walking to her room* here it is ^^
*Guardian Guard open the door for them*
Saolena Lunary:
I've never seen this room is really big *walk to the window* This view is beautifulSolner: Hope you are feeling well welcome Saolena. Everypony is willing to see you
Saolena Lunary: Yes, I can't wait to see them all, isn't it, right, Aqua Seka?
Aqua Seka: Of course!
Saolena Lunary: Tomorrow? it is going to be exciting day ^^
Solner: And I'll see you tomorrow ^^
Saolena Lunary: You to
Solner: *slowly close the door and walking away* Better to getting ready tomorrow... *sigh*
Music I've listen
www.youtube.com/watch?v=AYXv28…
--------------------
About Saolena La Lunary when you click it? Yes I've created my own species and it is looking great ;u; but still wanted to create another species for there world for my story >.>
Related content
Comments: 9
This is really cool! You included so much detail with a cool perspective!
Keep it up!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Thanks
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Hey! Awesome picture! I have a question remeber that I asked if I can edit these stories? I was just wondering can you give them to me in order so I will know what I am fixing and keep track of my work!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thanks ^^ you can edit my story ^^ and Oh, you mean give you my drawing what I've did from the story for an order there? :I or every drawing I've did :I
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Many of your drawings have stories underneath! I just want to now which one was written first second third and so on so forth so I can start editing them!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Oh
Here the story (not complete story order)
MLP: Taking a Walk
MLP: Red Rose with her foal alone
MLP: Red Rose and her little Pally
MLP: Paladin first friend
MLP: Sarina and Paladin taking a walk
MLP: Paladin's dinner with his friends (Redraw)
MLP: Welcome back
MLP: Arrival of Ariel City
MLP: Spending with friend
There is more, but? not feeling like to put more link there :I
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Ok great! So I will start with these and I will note you with my versions! And when i am finished we can talk about the others! <3
👍: 0 ⏩: 0