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Published: 2009-10-08 22:31:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 291; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description She smokes.
It floats around her skin, brushes off on me when I graze her wrist. It clings to my clothes, reminds me of her whenever I step outside and the orange-yellow ends are scattered on the side of the road.
The smell wraps around her, hiding any scent of perfume she might have put on, lingering in her hair, on her mouth.
They say that kissing a smoker is like licking an ashtray.
They’re wrong.
It’s all the things a regular kiss is, all the things that a kiss with someone who chews gum instead of smoking would be, but with a flavor that sticks around long after the moment is over, when you’re no longer connected at the mouth and waist and your hands aren’t pressed to her face.
It’s like a campfire, but harder to find. Nobody smokes like she does, slowly, taking pauses to breathe, to talk, to laugh.
Even the same brand of cigarette doesn’t smell the same when someone else smokes it. It’s different, not as sultry, not as sweet.
Other people smoke to kill a stronger addiction, because it’s a habit, or because they like it.
She smokes to bring flavor to life, to breath, to laughter.
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Comments: 8

hell-chicken [2009-10-09 17:10:22 +0000 UTC]

I love how believable this is. You've always had a talent for really getting inside a character's head and making the reader believe they're the one doing the talking.

I find this even more incredible because I'm pretty sure you would never kiss anyone who smoked. At least you wouldn't last time I checked...

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onlyever In reply to hell-chicken [2009-10-10 20:14:22 +0000 UTC]

Aw thanks. (= You flatter me shamelessly.

I'm not currently sure. I was hanging out with a friend of mine who smokes the other day and was like...dang. That actually smells kind of appealing and ...good.
And then there was this idea bouncing around in my head since...a couple weeks ago so I wrote it.
Kissing though, is another matter. q:

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hell-chicken In reply to onlyever [2009-10-11 05:24:39 +0000 UTC]

Yyyyeah, I'm not sure I could smooch a smoker.
-_-;

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onlyever In reply to hell-chicken [2009-10-13 02:29:51 +0000 UTC]

Ya never know until you try!
Although I'm not suggesting you should...necessarily.

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hell-chicken In reply to onlyever [2009-10-14 04:32:19 +0000 UTC]

Well, fortunately I don't.

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onlyever In reply to hell-chicken [2009-10-16 04:59:56 +0000 UTC]


Good.

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the--nomad [2009-10-08 22:35:09 +0000 UTC]

i love this man

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onlyever In reply to the--nomad [2009-10-10 20:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thanks.
I'm glad to hear it. (=

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