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I poured a lot of work into the middle panel of this page, so commentz plz!
Rings of Time story © *Okura
Okura, Venus, Tiare and other characters © *Okura
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I love the concept and composition of the middle panel. Awesome job!
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This is a great scene! 
Beautifully done!
I like the perspective you used for Okura and Taire on panel #5! 
And I like how you made their environment too. Its shows that they live in the Pacific (is that right?) with all the seaweed and coral.
Question: Do you use a reference photograph to draw Okura and Taire's position in panel #5?
Darn, if only I had time, pencil, and some paper......
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I didn't use a photo. I used a piece of art of being directly underneath and orca for general guidance at first for the look underneath, then adapted to my own picture as you see there.
Also, it's Tiare... The 'I' is before the 'A'...
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Oh ok! That's very good!
I sometimes use reference photos to make a position i'm not sure of... 
And I'm sorry for spelling her name wrong.... I get it confused I guess....
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Beautiful page
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Very good detail on your middle panel. Glad you even worked in the rays of light, it's always a nice touch.
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Wow, you definitely weren't kidding, that middle panel is amazing!! 
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Oh wow, this is definitely one of my favorite pages thusfar. That middle panel is stunning.It flow very well and the interaction between bro and sis. 
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Tiare's missing? Uh oh, thast never good.
Cute page, I love the interaction between the whale sibs.
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Now that's a cool panel. xD I like all the movement and expressions. Very detailed as well.
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*GASP* OKURAS! EVERYWHERE! 8D
Is it me, or Keeki's eyes show an obvious tiredness? 
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She's expression affection, so her eyes are partly lidded.
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Remember this is totally different from the story I created.
There is no Elorn name for Okura and Keeki does not die of cancer.
I'm actually considering switching to this story, cause I'm prefering it far more.
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Indeed, indeed.
Keeki has such a motherly charm...
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I love the different angles of Okura in the mid panel
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Yeah I was gonna say how amazing that middle panel is, It seems almost as if its moving.
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