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Published: 2003-06-30 15:32:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 253; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 23
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I just lie on the floorwith rock music pounding in my ears
but thats as deep as it goes
its just what I hear
no longer can I relate
no longer can I debate
it just all runs together
like some stormy weather
throbbing in my head.
but my soul seems to be
compaitively dead
but no one sees
its the eye of the storm
an unsettling calm
the same old norm
with the world in my palm
but I can\'t do
a damn thing about it
I can\'t crush it
I can\'t make it grow
its already dead
this world of mine
a paralell soul
to your worlds mind
it seems what is me
has withered away
I know it goes back together
but I know not which way
the shattered puzzle
with pieces missing
but I know they\'re all here
cause I watched them dissapear
I need to pick up the shards
and put them back together
but I know that theres
nothing left to do
so why?
Comments: 11
you are so not that depressed any more but oh well i shouldn't say that...i know penty of people don't show it until i see them bleeding then i'm like whoa didn't see that coming and yeah genious you sorta umm almost copied that one tool song...but i wuv you anyways ur poems ROCK!
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I love it, so felt, apathy, i really do know the feeling.
Wow!
Nice one.
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wow! that was wicked awsome. i totally got into it! great job
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Wicked poem!I like it...its different then other poems with big confussing words....keep up thee good work!
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Its feels so real and painful . I like how i can feel the emotions flowing in you when you were writing this . Good piece,dude .
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Oh my goodness gracious. I love this poem. You can totally picture a kid lyin there with his headphones on or his stereo really loud with some good rock slammin and this zoned look on his face.
Just wonderul. Good job and keep it up! Oh and I hope you're not too depressed anymore :/ Just know that some day you're life will pick up and get better
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very nice, i feel that way almost all the time now man =/
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Beautiful, I couldn't expect anything less from you: +Fav!
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Apathy... i fucking hate that feeling. You know, i picked a random poem and this one hit first.
Were you by chance listening to Tool?
Were you thinking about the time in your life when it really ment something...
but now its not... and its not the music lacking a soul, you are.
I like the poem for the emotion it displays, it sounds alot like something i'd write.
Could you message back to me about what you are listening to? Schism?
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