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Published: 2012-08-03 03:31:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 799; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 1
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Punk Shoot 4My first real attempt at a photo shoot. Let me know what you think, please. I would love to hear what you think!
Models: John, Tim, and Paul
Copyright: Alexander Matvejuk
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Comments: 15
I think this photo has a lot of good elements to it; the patches and bright contrast of the studs and patches of these punk guys and the easy relaxed atmosphere of their conversation put a smile on my face, and I also appreciated the angle with with the shot was taken, with some strong diagonal lines from the railroad tracks, gravel path and iron beams converging nicely in the upper left hand corner of the frame.
I think there are also some areas for improvement to consider for future shoots; the bottom right hand portion of the frame might be a bit stronger if either the entire body of the rightmost guy was visible; the manner in which his right leg and hand are cut off feels a bit off balance to me. In addition, those bright patches and high contrast black and white might benefit from some post-production tweaking in contrast to really bring out the colors of these kids in front of the less colorful background. Punks are all about standing out and making a statement, and doing so would really help this photo pack a punch!
Great work so far, I hope you keep on shooting and creating more work!
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Thank you for the wonderful critique
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No problem at all! Good luck with all your future projects!
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yes thats right, punk is dead. is just another cheap product for the consumers head!
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It is not dead i refuse to believe it
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No... those are lyrics by a punk band named Crass.
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well I am not a punk, sorry to say. But I have listened to a bit of the genre and it's pretty damn good I need to look up the band
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I love this one it shows their goofy side
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