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#element #forest #ice #magic #night #shewolf #superpower #wolf
Published: 2017-02-26 23:38:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 907; Favourites: 107; Downloads: 2
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Foxeus, that looks amazing! On a scale of 1 to 10 I'll give it a 100! 
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Haunting and mesmerizing. Β Your animals are divine!
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I'm gonna drop a quick critique in your lap.
The wolf turned out really well and all ( I've got no complaints there) but the placement of the moon poses certain difficulties. Because the wolf and the moon share a color tone, its hard to distinguish the two. As a result, unless looked at closely the wolf appears fat and thus loses much of its dignity and threat. Wolves are supposed to be long, loping predators after all. The easiest ways to fix this are to shift the moon's position or to change its coloring. Personally I'd move the moon to the top right since that's a slightly more interesting composition and if you worked it right, the wolf's shadow could lead us to the wolf and then the wolf could lead us up to the moon. At that point we've built a nice flow of motion that carries us through the picture.
Disclaimer, all that composition mumbo jumbo is just my opinion and you should feel free to ignore it.
I hope this helps.Β
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Thank you for mild critique. Appreciate big time
Yop, those are wings. It's magical creature, so i've made it all glowy. But you are right! They could be less white from outside or little shading around.
Or destroy that shape with feather sticking out now and then.
Also thanks for your tips. Totally love your suggestion for composition. Have a nice day ^^
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Happy to have helped, even if its restricted to jogging some ideas loose.
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Um actually that's not a moon!
its the wolf's wings
and foxeus did an amazing job so please don't bother the artist:3
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Sorry I didn't mean to be rude or anything, its just that in my experience artists are hungry for any feedback/critique they can get. Anyway just trying to help.
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This is beautiful!! I especially love the way the legs and paws turned out... also the muzzle... also all of it is great bahahaha. <3 You make me want to try to draw animals more often :3
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Thank you! It's always relaxing and so calm. And you can always hide bad anatomy with tons of fur
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Bahahah, that's true! XD I think my next full deviation might be Wolf's Rain fan art so I'll have to brush up on either wolf anatomy or covering wolf anatomy with lots of fur heheh
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Just draw a furball with head and legs
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I won't stress don't worry:3 I love to do art trades
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I LOVE ITΒ I love your art style is so coo!Β And I'll make sure I'll get your picture done as soon as I can!Β I just want it to be perfectΒ Β
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Thank you
Don't stress it out tho, the purpose of art trade is having fun
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Love it!Β thank you so much! It's awesome!!Β Β Β
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