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Description Stopping the update tonight here, just shy of 300 (woot! And we're not done yet!).

I'll leave it up to you to guess why Zhao burned the scroll.
Maybe he didn't want to leave any evidence? Or perhaps he doesn't want anyone else finding this scroll ever again and getting funny ideas.
Or something totally different.

Page original size 5,5" X 8".
Rough pencils. Grey shading, lettering and word balloons done in Photoshop
These pages done for fun, and also as a good exercise in storytelling and planning on such a long scale, which I had not really done before.
I am not planning on inking, cleaning more or coloring them. I simply do not have the time.

The Avatar universe belongs to Mike, Bryan, Nickelodeon-Viacom-MTV.
All the characters belong to them, but a few of the extras are my own creation.
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Comments: 82

rufftoon In reply to ??? [2009-05-19 19:37:59 +0000 UTC]

He doesn't need more brain shattering damage to his psyche. It's a good thing he wasn't around.

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Omnipotrent [2009-05-11 00:22:17 +0000 UTC]

Lol!!!

No idea why I said that...

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coNstantine2530 [2009-03-25 01:11:04 +0000 UTC]

Or perhaps he doesn't want to find out his destiny.

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horyokun [2009-03-24 04:27:04 +0000 UTC]

Saying that Zhao changed and burnt the scrolls for the spirits' sake would be too quick a conclusion.

I'm sure Rufftoon has something sneaky for us [:<

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rufftoon In reply to horyokun [2009-03-24 06:25:31 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if I am that sneaky.

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horyokun In reply to rufftoon [2009-03-24 09:34:47 +0000 UTC]

But you're good at leading into dramatic spins xD

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Horacus [2009-03-24 04:06:17 +0000 UTC]

exelent work want more.

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rufftoon In reply to Horacus [2009-03-24 06:25:08 +0000 UTC]

More coming.

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Horacus In reply to rufftoon [2009-03-25 00:05:24 +0000 UTC]

Perfect.

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Archaes8 [2009-03-24 02:48:00 +0000 UTC]

C'mon Zhao! You can do it, join the light side! D:

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rufftoon In reply to Archaes8 [2009-03-24 06:24:35 +0000 UTC]

The light side ain't as fun as the dark one.

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Archaes8 In reply to rufftoon [2009-03-24 17:31:13 +0000 UTC]

Yes it is! ;_;

xD

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SuperSilkie [2009-03-23 22:49:55 +0000 UTC]

Aanndd I'm pretty sure I just used that word in the wrong context XD

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rufftoon In reply to SuperSilkie [2009-03-24 06:24:17 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...scroll cooking.
Or cooking scroll.
Anyway, all is understood

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SuperSilkie [2009-03-23 22:49:35 +0000 UTC]

NOOOO Zhao, you are suppose to READ the scroll, not cook it! D:

Hmm...what is he demising now?

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scrappster [2009-03-23 22:40:08 +0000 UTC]

Ah! This is so much fun to read. Zhao seems like a miner/blacksmith for some reason. Totally not the muscles.

Love how you're treating Azula (she's my favorite character from the show, haha), so fantastic. I can't wait to see more of what happens between Zhao and Nauja's relationship grows and changes.

It's so strange seeing someone like Zhao in such a not-bad-guy role, but it's fascinating and he's still Zhao. You've done such a great job with this! It's such a joy to read, and I can't wait to see more!

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rufftoon In reply to scrappster [2009-03-24 06:23:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. It's hard to keep Zhao...well, Zhao. At the same time, he has to evolve a bit, what with a different life experience.

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Go-Devil-Dante [2009-03-23 21:29:11 +0000 UTC]

OMIGOD NO WAY totally ancient scroll!! Aaaw, hehe I was gonna say he looks really hot in the blacksmithy outfit hur hur, it's like zhao cosplay down here
wicked man, makes me wonder if something to do with those mining chimneys is gonna come back later Ooohohoo! you update so fast! your life seems awesome, drawin stories all day, aaah do you work in normal hours or like at night, or best in the morning?

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rufftoon In reply to Go-Devil-Dante [2009-03-23 21:44:07 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha, Zhao cosplaying different jobs, trying to find the best outfit to display himself at the best advantage.
Actually, most of these pages were done some time ago. I just need to fix and tweak them. The speed is a total illusion, I'm as slow as a slug. I have normal daytime work, so it leaves the evenings to work on these (never in the morning, I just can't wake up).

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Go-Devil-Dante In reply to rufftoon [2009-03-31 11:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Haha it's just so hard to imagine... I could... if I imagined myself at my most hard out and at my most motivated churning out a pencil sketched page within a day.... but you've done a bout 300 which means... 1 a day if it was within a year but still! The fact that you've done so many HAHA it boggles my wee mind haha! I like it tho cos it shows it can be done,

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rufftoon In reply to Go-Devil-Dante [2009-03-31 15:32:39 +0000 UTC]

I have friends who draw, ink and colors many pages in one day.
*shakes head* I don't think I'll ever be able to do that.

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Go-Devil-Dante In reply to rufftoon [2009-04-05 11:51:48 +0000 UTC]

I thought you meant you have friends who do all that FOR you haha! Awesome XD
Well there's always someone better, makes you draw more though so I guess it's all right

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rich591 [2009-03-23 21:12:10 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... has Zhao finally walked away from the dark side of the force?

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rufftoon In reply to rich591 [2009-03-23 21:44:45 +0000 UTC]

More like walking the thin line separating the good and the bad.

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rich591 In reply to rufftoon [2009-03-24 18:09:33 +0000 UTC]

Ah well, close enough.

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Silverene [2009-03-23 21:01:21 +0000 UTC]

Looking forward to more. I'll possibly never get tired of this story.

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rufftoon In reply to Silverene [2009-03-23 21:41:41 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks- I hope to keep it fun until the end.

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Silverene In reply to rufftoon [2009-03-23 22:40:01 +0000 UTC]

I have absolutely no doubt about it.

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Silverene [2009-03-23 21:01:02 +0000 UTC]

Looking forward to more. I'll possibly never get tired of this story.

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Silvre [2009-03-23 19:56:19 +0000 UTC]

LOVE that second panel. Just gorgeous.

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rufftoon In reply to Silvre [2009-03-23 20:42:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Cantahari [2009-03-23 19:45:27 +0000 UTC]

The unique copy of an expensive ancestral scroll burned... Lao would have an epilepsy attack if he were present xD

You are managing the story so well, I can't wait for know what plans Zhao and Azula have between hands.

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rufftoon In reply to Cantahari [2009-03-23 20:43:20 +0000 UTC]

You are right- Lao would have a seizure.
As for plans...Zhao and Azula may not be in total agreement with the final results.

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Adi-Ilythiiri [2009-03-23 19:11:05 +0000 UTC]

Or, y'know, because the scroll is useless.
It'd be the Zhao thing to do.

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rufftoon In reply to Adi-Ilythiiri [2009-03-23 20:43:35 +0000 UTC]

True, that could work.

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CartoonJessie [2009-03-23 19:01:12 +0000 UTC]

Zhao does not seem to be into reading...

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rufftoon In reply to CartoonJessie [2009-03-23 20:44:25 +0000 UTC]

Seems like stories of spirits don't interest him.
I wonder if he's a closet fan of romance novels XD

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626elemental [2009-03-23 19:00:06 +0000 UTC]

Or maybe.... he memorized it, then burnt it to have more negotiating power with Azula. Or just to mess with her

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rufftoon In reply to 626elemental [2009-03-23 20:44:44 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha, good theories!

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JasmineLeilani [2009-03-23 17:44:04 +0000 UTC]

Thought I agree with previous theories others have offered here, I offer my own.

Zhao...wanted to burn something. This was the nearest thing he could reach.
Sweat tent...
The end

(I stick to the side of randomness, it makes me neither right nor wrong lol)

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rufftoon In reply to JasmineLeilani [2009-03-23 20:44:58 +0000 UTC]

Sweat tent is always the right answer.

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JasmineLeilani In reply to rufftoon [2009-03-24 17:28:27 +0000 UTC]

See, I thought so!

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YakuKikyo [2009-03-23 16:43:17 +0000 UTC]

Well at first I'd say the will go with her but when Azula said he didn't change I kinda changed my mind...

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citizen17 [2009-03-23 14:18:29 +0000 UTC]

Maybe he's rejecting it?


Great update, by the way. Thank you.

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Chellon [2009-03-23 12:47:24 +0000 UTC]

Zhao is good theory: He doesn't want anyone else to find the scroll to abuse the water tribe.

Zhao is evil theory: He wants to be Azula's only source of information.

Zhao is Zhao theory: Impossible to discern motives through given information.

Hmm...

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JasmineLeilani In reply to Chellon [2009-03-23 17:42:10 +0000 UTC]

I second this notion.

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rufftoon In reply to Chellon [2009-03-23 17:39:47 +0000 UTC]

You've summed it up nicely.

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Leona629 [2009-03-23 11:49:34 +0000 UTC]

I know the reason. He has chosen a side - the same he always chooses.

Zhao is forever on Zhao's side, no one else's.

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rufftoon In reply to Leona629 [2009-03-23 17:39:16 +0000 UTC]

A lot of truth in that.

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Menamebephil [2009-03-23 10:42:14 +0000 UTC]

All these theories are in the wrong direction. It's quite obvious that he's burnt a recipie scroll, after some bad experiences with stewed sea prunes.

The whole thing with Azula was a dream sequence brought on by food poisoning.

Seriously. It's all in the subtext, people.

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