Comments: 57
NickShepard117 In reply to ??? [2020-03-05 23:54:39 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, most of the credit goes to the artist though
I just asked for it
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
pauljordan [2019-12-13 13:19:49 +0000 UTC]
hey nickshepard117, are you going to post the next chapter on the knights of remnant: ring of darkness, or what?!, cause you've been busy doing stuff that's understandable, but this has been going on for far too long!, you've basically wasted an entire year hardly posting any new chapters doing other things you like to do, so why don't you do us all a favor, and stop wasting time, and post the damn chapter!
👍: 0 ⏩: 2
NickShepard117 In reply to pauljordan [2019-12-15 23:10:45 +0000 UTC]
Excuse me, but what do you think is going on here? You think that I'm writing this chapter for profit? For fame? No I wrote that story because I had a passion for it at the time. Now, lately my passion has been running dry for reasons that are my own, so I would appreciate it if you'd not treat me as if I owe you anything. There are thousands of stories on Fanfic that are unfinished for longer than a year, or even 5. I still love my story, I fully, whole heartedly, intend to finish what I started. But right now I can't, and I don't have to explain myself to you. If you don't like waiting, that's too bad, I can't help you. But don't presume to tell me I owe you a favor for posting MY story for YOUR entertainment. Now have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year.
👍: 0 ⏩: 2
pauljordan In reply to NickShepard117 [2019-12-17 04:04:16 +0000 UTC]
hey NickShepard117, can I call ya nick?, anyway, it's me again, I was wondering if you read my apologies yet, I just want to let you know that I'm sorry for the way I acted a few days ago, I was being an impatient jerk, and I should've known better than to be like that, so can you find it in yourself to forgive me?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
NickShepard117 In reply to pauljordan [2019-12-17 04:07:02 +0000 UTC]
I read it
I get that you like my story, and I appreciate that
But like most writers, I currently have writers block
It passed before, and I hope it will again soon
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
pauljordan In reply to NickShepard117 [2019-12-17 04:11:23 +0000 UTC]
I hope so to nick, I've really enjoyed reading your version of RWBY by mixing in both the Hobbit and the Lord of the Rings Franchises, and I look forward to see how it ends.
aside from all of that, even though the first part of the Atlas arc is nearing it's end in the actual show, I'm curious to know what your thoughts are so far in the new season.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
NickShepard117 In reply to pauljordan [2019-12-17 04:13:09 +0000 UTC]
Things seem too good
Now it's rolling down hill
I'm mentally preparing myself for another Fall of Beacon
And what's worse, I fear Winter will be another 'Pyrrha' if everything plays out the same way again
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
pauljordan In reply to NickShepard117 [2019-12-17 04:32:34 +0000 UTC]
I know, the whole "history repeating itself" and what not, and I'm hoping that she won't end up like pyrrha, I hoping that somebody else will take the mantle of being the new maiden, and not weiss's sister.
Ironwood maybe thinking that he's doing the right thing about revealing salem's existence to the world of remnant, sure he's got everything ready to quell the panic in both atlas and mantel, but he's NOT taking things into consideration that the other three kingdoms who will not be quelled, sure they've got their own military factions, but it won't be enough to keep the people from panicking and drawing grimm at the same time, there's also the fact that both the island of Patch and Menagerie do not have any grimm defenses.
The problem here is that he's not taking the live of the many into account, he can't see that he's gonna put peoples lives at risk if he reveals Salem's existence to the whole world, which is why his plan is a flawed one.
So if by any chance a miracle happens, I'm hoping it'll be a damn good one, and if not, well then, mostly everyone in Atlas and Mantel are screwed either way.
Ruby and her friends may have prevented the fall of Haven, but I don't think they'll be able to prevent the fall of atlas, I mean, have you seen the state it's in?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
NickShepard117 In reply to pauljordan [2019-12-17 04:38:03 +0000 UTC]
Revealing Salem is a game changer
For the first time in probably a long time, Evil has a Face
But right now, yes, Ironwood is focusing on his plan
But it's because he's thinking about the big picture
He doesn't just have the chance to connect the world again with CCT, he also has a chance to clear Atlas' name in the eyes of the world by also revealing that Salem caused ALL of it
But as for history repeating itself, it's already happening
This time, it's Ruby and company being just as secretive as Ozpin
And like the old man, it's going to blow up in their face
All it takes is one mistake
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
NickShepard117 In reply to pauljordan [2019-12-17 05:31:27 +0000 UTC]
Or another Deus Ex Machina related to Ruby, again
👍: 0 ⏩: 2
pauljordan In reply to NickShepard117 [2019-12-19 04:15:09 +0000 UTC]
so what kind of miracle can we expect to happen for the rest of the season?
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
pauljordan In reply to NickShepard117 [2019-12-17 12:08:21 +0000 UTC]
I hope you're not referring to penny, cause she already lost her once back at Beacon, and she'd be damn sure not to let that happen again.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
pauljordan In reply to NickShepard117 [2019-12-15 23:27:15 +0000 UTC]
look, I'm sorry okay?, I wasn't making sound like you owe me anything, it's just that, I have a very bad patience level, well not very bad, it's just that, I was wondering what's been keeping you, and I like this story too, I like every part of it, if I was being a jerk about my previous comment, then I'm very sorry, and I'll try not to pester you again.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Jokerz-1824 In reply to pauljordan [2019-12-15 23:03:10 +0000 UTC]
If you have such a problem with people actually having to put their jobs and their lives before their hobbies, then stop harassing them and just leave entirely.
👍: 1 ⏩: 1
pauljordan In reply to Jokerz-1824 [2019-12-15 23:28:43 +0000 UTC]
I don't have a problem, I already typed my apologies to nickshepard117, so there.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Jokerz-1824 In reply to pauljordan [2019-12-15 23:32:31 +0000 UTC]
Good, because I happen to be his co-writer. So by insulting him like that, you also insulted me.
👍: 1 ⏩: 1
pauljordan In reply to Jokerz-1824 [2019-12-15 23:38:30 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry okay?!, and I didn't mean to insult you guys, it's just that I have this tendency to lose my patience when stuff like this takes so long to be posted, or updated an stuff, so again, I'm sorry for insulting you two.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
ReaperHollow1008 [2019-06-30 16:27:02 +0000 UTC]
Does anyone think Pyrrha could by pregnant with Jaune's baby after the party?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Comet9 [2019-06-29 21:26:52 +0000 UTC]
“And its SWEEEET SWEET SWEET VICTORY yeah! And it’s ours for the taking! ITS OURS FOR THE FIGHT!”
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Seramic97 [2019-06-28 18:33:57 +0000 UTC]
Did you hear the new lyric of forever fall that for Jaune and Pyrrha?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Seramic97 In reply to NickShepard117 [2019-06-28 18:50:05 +0000 UTC]
It beautiful and it show us that their love is true and it will never change.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Seramic97 In reply to NickShepard117 [2019-06-29 02:00:59 +0000 UTC]
You know what would be cool in your story is that you should have Jaune say something like Capt in the final battle in Endgame.
👍: 0 ⏩: 2
Comet9 In reply to Seramic97 [2019-06-29 21:23:37 +0000 UTC]
Endgame? What’s that?
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
NickShepard117 In reply to Seramic97 [2019-06-29 15:49:02 +0000 UTC]
Be more specific
He said A LOT of good stuff
Lol
👍: 0 ⏩: 2
Seramic97 In reply to NickShepard117 [2019-07-01 13:22:12 +0000 UTC]
Like when Cap said "AVENGERS!....assemble". I i was thinking either Jaune would say "for Ruby" or "HUNTSMEN .. attack."
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
NickShepard117 In reply to Seramic97 [2019-07-01 13:26:18 +0000 UTC]
Nah, too easy
I have my own ideas for that, but it’ll be for another battle
Lol
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Comet9 In reply to NickShepard117 [2019-06-29 21:22:59 +0000 UTC]
Just a thought does Ruby have any ships with anyone? Like with OCs or anything?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
NickShepard117 In reply to Comet9 [2019-06-29 21:26:14 +0000 UTC]
Yes
He’s in my story, my partner’s oc
“Jacob Cobalt”
He made an appearance in Rivendell of the second story
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Comet9 In reply to NickShepard117 [2019-06-29 21:39:48 +0000 UTC]
And there are no pics of them?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Comet9 In reply to NickShepard117 [2019-06-29 22:13:21 +0000 UTC]
I’ve just seen it through the link and I thought it be a picture with Jacob and ruby.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
MartyrFan [2019-02-07 04:25:27 +0000 UTC]
Whoa, beautiful work here. I need to get back to reading Ring of Darkness.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
NickShepard117 In reply to MartyrFan [2019-02-19 04:21:27 +0000 UTC]
What did you think of the latest chapter?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
MartyrFan In reply to NickShepard117 [2019-02-24 09:30:25 +0000 UTC]
I've been busy with my last semester of college right now. I'll get to it.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
flash600 [2019-02-06 15:34:50 +0000 UTC]
I love this story so much, a little worried that it's turning into an obsession...Nah...
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
SweetHoney124 [2019-02-06 07:55:20 +0000 UTC]
"Mon Coeur sera Toujours le tien," -Jaune's line in French
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
SweetHoney124 [2019-02-06 07:36:04 +0000 UTC]
One question, why does your fanfic get me hype than the canon ones?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Seramic97 In reply to SweetHoney124 [2019-02-06 15:38:37 +0000 UTC]
Because it's more progressed and has a plot that can defeat Salem. And also Jaune and Pyrrha are together and he's more stronger than the real show.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Comet9 In reply to Seramic97 [2019-06-29 21:24:38 +0000 UTC]
What’s wrong with canon?
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Lost-One-60 [2019-02-06 05:10:44 +0000 UTC]
Nice work
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
| Next =>