greenbearrr [2011-03-17 00:23:10 +0000 UTC]
haha, cleverly, you jumped onto another subject kind of unrelated to the topic, but I do actually find this poem to be entriguing and unique in comparison to your other ones. You took it on a whole different direction(which i actually like), and i mean i think you ran off the tracks but haha pretty good? o.o
hehe um the thing is, i would've assumed you to write about the lines being parallel or perpendicular, or simply about Pi, or circles and squares. hehe if you had added all of these things and pieced them with your message, i think the poem would have been way more relative to its subject haha x3
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