Dancewithknives [2019-03-15 13:51:21 +0000 UTC]
Looks really good. Better than anything I could do. I do understand its supposed to be an anime, but the head really feels out of place in this piece, not saying its bad, but that id doesn’t jive with the body.
As a simple solution, I would suggest wrapping her head in a shemagh or bandana.
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demihime [2019-03-14 19:13:50 +0000 UTC]
This is a fun pose, and you've done a pretty good job with most of the anatomy! The only thing I would note with regard to anatomy is that you've made her feet and hands too small. I know that's a stylistic thing in anime (especially tiny hands in recent moe shows), but it can make some poses look awkward.
I did also notice that the lighting on her face doesn't match the rest of the image at all (which makes it look a little detached). There's almost no shading at all, indicating a bright, diffuse light on her face- while you appear to have a dimmer, more focused light elsewhere (generating deep shadows over most of her body with distinct highlights), and a very bright, heavy backlight. Keeping your lighting consistent will help pull the piece together~
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