KonataChanJapan [2011-05-15 02:42:11 +0000 UTC]
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Dear JimandCand,I really loved this peice when i saw it for the first time!I love how you turned a simple manga book character into a more complex character.Great Job on the background with the little clouds in the corner and good job shading on yotsubas dress and skin, under the trees in the background and on the red railing on the bridgee.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> This peice is full of detail and I enjoy veiwing it veryy much. Over all you did a very good job on Yotsuba and her clothing.Nice Blue background and Shading.4-5 Stars All around e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
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N0XATI In reply to KonataChanJapan [2011-05-15 14:01:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for this critique! It is the first one which I receive on all my arts. I spent a lot of time on every element of the drawing. Sometimes, it was so long that I gave up during several days to change me the ideas, and I took back. I am satisfied with the result. Thank you again for your critique!
KonataChanJapan In reply to N0XATI [2011-05-18 23:30:22 +0000 UTC]
no problem I really liked your Yotsuba Fan Peice
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tsaaif [2011-05-20 02:26:43 +0000 UTC]
Elle est tellement mignone!
N0XATI In reply to tsaaif [2011-05-20 10:58:14 +0000 UTC]
Hiiiiiiii merci!
tsaaif In reply to N0XATI [2011-05-20 19:29:11 +0000 UTC]
De rien!
StrawberryComet [2011-05-16 11:33:43 +0000 UTC]
This looks great!
BakerChemi [2011-05-14 20:29:14 +0000 UTC]
That's a very cute pic of her! Great background, too! I love the trees!
N0XATI In reply to BakerChemi [2011-05-14 21:27:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank youuuu!