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Published: 2011-05-29 06:36:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 2281; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 23
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I did this charcoal drawing last year for school. Now that I look back at this, I see a lot of things that need improvement. Anyways, tell me what you guys think
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how big the paper was?
btw, i 
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What improvement does this need?!
That's brilliant!
Did U use grey cardboard for the backgroung or did U just draw any greyish tone?
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Mostly the anatomy. I drew some of the muscles too sharp, like a knife almost ( e.g., the pectoral and calves). If were to go back, I round off the muscles. The board was white.
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The steps are definitely out of perspective, but I didn't notice it until you pointed it out in the comments. I think this is a beautiful drawing. There's so much contrast between light and dark and angular and round.
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yeah lol back then I didn't know that you need to have a common vanishing point. Glad you liked it
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I dunno, what do you think?
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yeah, the anatomy I could do better...and the steps are out of perspective. Thanks for the comment.
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Very very well done great shading. These mistakes you talk about? I can see a couple of upper bodymuscles that are a bit out but that is being super critical. It's a very good drawing
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