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MocaJoe — Still Young
Published: 2004-02-11 05:28:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 66; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 26
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Through crushing falls pinned by mistakes,Emotions blurring thoughts once clear.
Withou original unbiased views,
rapids tear at over emotional ways.
Currents so strong,
Wisping me away.
Pinned between rocks,
I could pull to safety.
Fate's choice being dragged in known depths.
A furry of panic was my demis.
Strong enough to save myself,
multiple chances to fix problems lost.
Instead of learning when I fell in,
Now I fight to prolong the last breath.
As hopeless as it seems now,
I won't let it break me !
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I might have to put this on my door as an ode to my parents... I really like this because it's like teen angst about the pressures of life and being strong enough to get through it. It's a pretty nice imagery peice and would make a damn good anthem if we could get it to music.
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