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Published: 2018-01-23 20:06:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1663; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 2
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Pike finally lets Kveikur have it a little, while the walls melt around themWait what
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A minor note: Kveikur should probably be saying "Or else she'll kill you too!" Contractions are usually fine in spoken parts, and less people will hopefully read it as "Or else I will kill you too!"
Anyways, what a reveal!
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i purposely avoid contractions with Kveikur cause of his way of speaking
i didn't think anyone would get confused with it tbh >u>
but thankyou!
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Oh, well then...
At second glance, the spacing between the the words is pretty tight. Maybe separate them out more? That'll probably fix it.
You're welcome!
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in comes the heavy stuff
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Indeed.
Loving the comic as always, though! This is honestly one of my favorites.
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The walls are already getting that treatment.
RIP walls...
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the walsl are meltiinngggggg
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at first read I thought he was saying "or else I will kill you too" and I was like sHOOT
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GOSH i hope not too many ppl read it that way hah
but yea
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